This is so cool! Sesshy swear he could easily win Kagome's heart back. He thought she was like the other hoes that wants his fame and a good position. Tsk tsk tsk...poor dog.
Please tell me how to reach that website. When i went to it, shit like, trees and adult fan clubs popped up. Well please continue on here.

How do I reach your fanfiction from that site? All that comes up is crap like furniture and videos. Can you please point me in the right direction I love your fanfic!

Thank you for letting us know!! Please keep us updated with any new info on your stories. I love reading them!

Hi there, just wanted to say the quad is an extremely good story! :) Could you add me onto ur updates list? Thanks, and hope the next chapter is up soon!

will you be posting on dokuga as welll?

great story you should put your story on dokuga.com

So are you not going to post on dokuga.com as well?

please can you transfer this fic over to dokuga.com? i really love this story and i'm DYING to know what happens!!1

hi,
i was just reading your story the quad and saw the link you posted. when i checked it, there is only one story appearing under your name on adult fanfiction and it is Escape from fate. am i looking at the wrong place or didnt you upload the story yet? thanks for letting me know, i really like your story. :)
daisie

oh please update soon! I think I'm dying without it!

omg i love your story! this is such a cliffy!!! i want to read the next chapter so bad its not even funny.

if your looking to upload your fics to a new site try Dokuga. i guess thats gonna be the new home for kagsess lovers. but aff is good to so please update!

hi! I think your story is really awesome and i love the plot, it was very creative from the beginning. I read your author's note though and i was speculating why your going to transfer your stories over to inu.adultfanfiction.com when you can just transfer them to dokuga.com since that's where most people are putting their Kag/Sess fanfictions there?

I really like this story a lot. Can you please write some more chapters?

omg!!
this story is amazing
i've been reading fanfics forever and theres is only like 2 i find
that are really good and they where the first kagome sesshomaru fanfiction i ever read and now i can say there is 3 i find really really really good please keep wrriting!

how can i fine your story on the adult fanfiction.net site

you're not going to dokuga.com then?

Another place you can post it, where a lot of the SS writers are going, is dokuga.com. Thanks for letting us know where it find it, though. This is an increadibly interesting story.

I really love your story, and i've been following it since the beginning.

I know that you plan on finishing the story on adultfanfiction, but could you also consider posting on dokuga.com or mediaminer.org?

You should check out Dokuga.com This website was started by demonlordlover and Miss Kagura and is a great haven dedicated to Kagome and Sesshoumaru. They are in partnership with SS to get amny of teh great authors, such as yourself, to move the stories without any loss of communciation between fans and authors.

Please consider this site. I know you won't be disappointed.

can u post it here pls dokuga http://www.dokuga.com/ thanksss

heeeey! awsm fic you have her. sadly i cannot access adultfanfiction.net. =/ and therefore cannot read the other chapters. if it is not too much trouble could you please email them ? >!

can you post it at douga too

thank you for letting us know do u know when they will close the site and why ?and wat other websites i can continue reading more fanfiction from kagome and sesshoumaru thank you and sorry for the bother

I'm not able to access that site, is it possible your beta could post it on Dokuga.com?

please could you possibly post this on the Dokuga website as well? I really love this story.

Wow!!! The last chapter was so intense. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'll be waiting for it.

Anyway, can you email me if this story has new chapters. I wanna keep reading it until the end.

I love your story and I understand your need to become focused on your studies. I respect that and your creativity. Your on my favorites so I can't wait until your next update in May.

Sweet! I am so looking foreward to the next chapter. Would you mind adding me to your alert list? My email is the one shown here.

I will wade in and say that it was consensual sex, although Sesshoumaru made sure he was rough, dominant, and punished her with the act itself. Kagome, although unable to speak, did not even try to stop what was happening. She did invite him to be intimate with her and was willing to go along with what she thought was rough play until she realized that he actually meant what he was saying. Then I believe she wanted to witness the remainder of the experience to see what would happen after. When you love somebody you leave yourself vulnerable to be hurt. The fact that she allowed such physical abuse I believe is because she could not quite believe that he would actually treat her in such a manner. So, in summary: abusive--yes, rape--no.

Let me first say, excellent job. Second, I think Inuyasha should make Sessy admit his felelings for Kagome and then put him through a test or their father should. He has prove himself to her. She did a selfless act by giving herself to him and rejecting the position. So he should do something if not more.

Ok do all the good work you can and I will be waiting for the next chapter hopefully i wont go crazy and pulls my eyes out for wanting to know what happens next

Just write the next chapter.A huge explanation to this gal,is not necessary.
I want to continue to read the story.

I think that you need to classify this as more than a bad experience. You are right that it was not rape. However, it was still abuse (sexual abuse). I believe that is an aspect that needs to be addressed in the story.

Sesshoumaru's character see sex as a tool. Even if he had not done this to her, I don't see how he could really be able to make a serious mental and emotional connection to the physcal act. His character has also ensured that Kagome's character will have a hard time as seeing the physical act of sex as something more than a tool to be used by the dominant partner.

But I agree with you, you technically did not write a non consenual scene. What you wrote is more frightening than rape, and far more difficult to over-come.

By the way this is not a flame, I enjoy your stories. I am really hoping that you explore the aspects of Kagome's recovery. I also want Sesshoumaru to have a chance at redemption. But that will only come if he understands his faults and failings.

Please update when you can.

Emily

I have to say something about the whole 'rape thing'.

Firstly, even though you may have not intended Sesshomaru to rape Kagome, but in the end, I actually thought it was.

Well it can definitely be CONSIDERED as rape, after Inuyasha had said it, i kind of thought, 'Yeah, i totally agree with Inuyasha'.

You wrote, "She told him yes, and then never told him no." That's because she COULDN'T say no.

Remember, "She tried to speak, but that was again denied as he clamped his hand down over her mouth."

So yeah, anyways the reason why i had to say something about this was because i think you can make your story more interesting if Kagome can use this weapon or 'crime' against Sesshomaru.

This will make it HARDER for Sesshomaru to win her back, you can use this as a way of creating friction between them, a barrier - and these are the best things in a good story.

The drama, the forces that are trying to prevent a happy ending and battle of emotions.

I know this thing was originalyl addressed to 'LadySafire', but i hope my input was good enough too.

I have to agree with Lady Safire on this one. She was willing to a point, but a woman is allowed to be willing until the very last moment and if she says no, or even tells somebody to stop midway through sex and they don't, that's rape.

Kagome couldn't do that. You had Sess restrain her as he was becoming nasty and therefore didn't her a choice or an opportunity to say no. So it's not that she didn't say no, or she was acting like she wanted it before, it was that he took away her choice to say no. That's still rape.

Oh and I also forgot to leave a review during the time you asked this question. I know I'm late, but I just remembered about it. Can you add me to your mailing list for this story. My email address is akay_0688@yahoo.com. Thanks

No new update... hm. I swear when I read that A/N I just about pulled my hair out thinking: "NO NEW UPDATE UNTIL MAY!!!?"

But then I calmed down remembering that it was now April, so the wait won't be too bad. Ooh Alaska, sounds fun. Hope you have fun as well.

Rape: I tried not to really focus on what happened on that desk that night, but I would have to agree that it was indeed rape. I stayed somewhat quiet about it, brushing it off as if Sesshomaru was just having a "Dr. Jekyl - Mr. Hyde" moment, but since the question has come up I would have to agree that it was indeed rape. You made it so as to show Kagome was serious about taking her relationship into the next level, but she didn't know that he didn't know about what she did yet And in the fact that neither of them knew they kind of mixed up the signals of what the other was doing. She was doing it out of love - at least that's what she was trying to do. But he was doing it as if treating her like another whore he's come across. My thing is this was he not the one that kept saying that he was going to take her anyway? *shrugs* whatever - mind games much.

To me him telling her that told her that they would go further - and so she wanted to start taking the next step that night. I was actually hoping that she would talk to him about the withdrawal first. But when you set it up like this I figured oh she know's what she's doing. There's got to be a reason to this.

Why was it rape? I agree with LadyKy and Biteswhenprovoked as well. What started off as a Yes, take me I'm yours situations instantly became an I don't want this the minute he didn't let her touch him and instead holding her down and to top that off covering her mouth - so she couldn't speak at all. Kagome is acting like a victim and she's in denial.

Whatever you choose to do, I'm with you. I'm still reading, for if I wasn't I would have stopped right at the "rape" incident, but I'm curious as to what would happen. If you continue it this way I do have to hope and beg that you don't make it easy for Sesshomaru to get her back. Forgiving processes are hard situations to go through and/or write, trust me I know.

Good luck (*hugs*)

i love this story, i think to alot of people it is rape because of how she dealt with it after, she has all the aftereffects of a rape victim, a date rape victim. but i actually look at it as more of a abused woman, she defends the one who did it,takes blame for it, accepts it, and blames herself for it aswell. the couseling idea is good but most abused women wont seek help until an intervention is held, or the abuser nearly kills them.or they simply reach the end of what they can take and snap.howeve in your story she leaves her abuser this is good, and you can work it into it. abused women truly love the abuser which is why they defend them.and you can be married and still raped by your spouse, i counseled women who have been, and they say because they never pushed them away, or said no it wasnt rape, but it was, i look forward to seeing how you deal with this and i wish you luck on your finals and a safe trip.alaska is beautiful country.

sigh .. so no update .. that was mean i saw The Quad and was like 0.0 YESSSS!!! an update and then my hopes and dreams were shattered.. but thats ok ill just have to wait for may !!! good luck on all your projects and presentations!!

poor kags huhuhuhu

It was rape. Kagome could'nt tell
him to stop cause you metioned
in the story that Sesshoumaru put his hand over Kagomes mouth so she could'nt talk. So if she wanted to stop him she could'nt. And the fact he just kept going even though she was in pain he did'nt give her time to adjust. That proves it was rape.

It was rape. Kagome could'nt tell
him to stop cause you metioned
in the story that Sesshoumaru put his hand over Kagomes mouth so she could'nt talk. So if she wanted to stop him she could'nt. And the fact he just kept going even though she was in pain he did'nt give her time to adjust. That proves it was rape.

OMG, I think I love you right now (mind you, not in a creepy way.) I have been following this story for quite some time and I have to confess myself an avid reader of yours. But, imagine my shock when I'm reading your latest A/N and you mention my story! I can't even begin to describe how...simply marvelous that made me feel. It's 11:30 at night & I have school tomorrow, but I feel so light and airy you can hardly imagine. The point is, I would like to thank you from the deepest depths of my heart for your kind words and you have my gratitude, from one authoress to another.
And about the school - I find myself in the same predicament, but as well all know (unfortunately) school does come first. I know what you're going through, sister. What with the semester coming to a close and all, free time is like an extinct species. I want to just say that I support you, and please update as soon a you can! You rock my world!

I agree with Lady Ky.
A rapist plays mind games. they will try to make you believe that its your fault that you wanted it and they aren’t the bad guy.
By Kagome seeing him with a new girl every night she knew that he just screwed girls and threw them away, but yet he started walking her home and talking with her letting her know that he liked her, and then he screws her and basically throws her out of his office, since she doesn’t know that he doesn’t know that she gave up her chance to work with him it looks like he put it in her mind that he felt different about her only to treat her different after he fucked her.
And i agree she is acting like a rape victim. Some victims stand up for their rapist because if they admit that the guy raped them then they are admitting that they are raped, and there are a million reasons why they wouldn’t want to admit that, admitting it would be acknowledging that it happened, some feel ashamed that they were raped, fear that no one will believe them, fear that he could hurt her or someone in her family, some even try to convince themselves that it didn’t happen like if you tell yourself something over and over again you might convince yourself that its true.
Its also all point of view. If she truly doesn’t believe its rape then no one would be able to convince her, but by Inuyasha telling kagome and sesshomaru that sesshomaru raped her its going to be in their minds. (well if they were real people and not fictional characters that is)

Sorry if this is an unwanted review I just thought I would put my opinion in.

I'm not sure about ladysafire, but I'll give my thoughts on this for you. while Kagome may have not said or given any communication that told him to stop, it wasn't what she had actually offered to him, yes she offered her body but also her heart, with that she left herself open to a rape worse or just as bad as physical, what Sesshomaru did was in a way emotional rape, the not allowing her to touch him gave him a control over her that a couple making love won't normally have unless they both were into the whole bondage thing.
honestly though even if she told him to stop would he have since he assumed that she was doing it for the job?
if you look at it like that, then yes it's rape, Kagome was looking to take their relationship to the next level since she has left the school, however; Sesshomaru didn't know anything about that and made assumptions that if you look at it for that point of view it can be seen as rape. I know rape both the physical and emotional kind, the reaction that Kagome had to that was one of a rape victim, the sticking up for him and telling people that he didn't rape her is a normal response of a victim to make them feel that they have done nothing wrong that the whole thing was just what they wanted.
if somewhere in your story that Kagome finally states that Sesshomaru did rape her then you have set up the bases for it so far. Even Sesshomaru is displaying the signs of regret, the reacting the 'rape' can be identified as two things, one is a reliving of a conquest most rapist tend to do this is some form or another, two a deep sign of guilt he clamed Kagome as a mate therefore his beast could be trying to make him feel the guilt of his rape of her.

that is my opinion, it is based off the tails of friends rape and my own.

i love this story!

one thing, at the end of the last ch., u put "scenes" but i think you meant "senses". i adore ur writing tho!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I really like this story a lot and I'm dying to know what happens!!!!

Wow, I've only read Fate, but I think that this one is good as well. Really like your writing style. Update either soon please. ;)

Great story! Hope to see the next chapter soon.
I hope you aren't just going to have Kagome just leap back into Sesshomaru's arms. No matter what they both say what Sess did was rape. Both need therepy before they can consider a happy life together.
I can't wait to see where you go with this.
LadySafire

i would like to know when you update if you wouldn't mind.
i rather like this fic

Wheee!!! Get me on that there alert list for the next chapterrrr! Pwease? :3 3

Dude. That is soooo unfair things were really heating up and you just left me hanging with freakin Koga walkin in sayin "Mate" well what the heck happens Ugh! this is just like all the other writers they freakin stop the story just when it gets good damit anyway I feel better now after blown off some steam : ) so pleaaase pleaaase update your story soon. Thanks -Asia : )

Omg i love this story!!!!!!!!
you have to wright more very soon!!!!!!!

I cant wait much longer until i EXPLODE!!!!
lol

Whoa, I bet all three of them are gonna have one heck of a fight on their hands huh. Will Inu-Papa be making an appearance concerning the whole "she's my mate" debacle?
Since Kagome is part of Inuyasha's pack and all what is going to happen? I mean since he stated the whole she's-my-pack-daughter-cuz-she-confided-in-me-like-a-daughter-would-her-father is Sesshoumaru gonna have to try and "court" Kagome? I can't wait for the next update...oh yeah I was also wondering if I could be added to the update list...if its not too much trouble. My email is lllotrfan@yahoo.com Thanks!

bum bum bun

Hmmm.

How will Sesshomaru convince Kagome to be his assistant, especially if she's not a student to that University.

How will Inuyasha and Koga react to the news, other then shocked.

Wonder how their dad will feel about Sesshomaru having a mate.

Please update ASAP

qqqhhhhh plaese do not stop plase up date soon

excellent.
i like the story,and it would be nice to see a humbled sesshomaru.
hurry with the next exciting chapter.
i know i can wait.
it'll be worth it.

Wow, that was intense...

That was awesome! I glad that Sesshy now knows the truth. Now it's gonna be up to Kagome what will happen next. And I can't wait to read it! Oh, and I would love to have an email sent to me whenever you update. My email is policegirl522@yahoo.com. Thank you.

thank u so much for updatin n this story justt keeps gettin better n better i love it! Keep up the good work

its really good so hurry up with the updates. and if you would put me on your alert list
Thanks

I'm seriously lmao here!!!!

Is Kaggy gonna be pregger??? that would complicate things even more....and we should definately add Inuyasha and Sessy's dad into the mix......let their dad beat Sessy up!!! pwease????

please update soon!

OMFG this is such a good fanfic!!!! plez update as soon as possible n here is my email: tir3dgurln@gmail.com, so plez add me on ur update list. but tell me where did u get the idea of Kags watching Sess have sex? was it ur experiences or a friends? it ok if u dont want to tell me but again amazing story so far! also with the big miss understanding problem in the chapters seven through nine was sooo good dat it made me cry!!! but it was in a good way , dont worry! and i think i lyk story one: Captures, better although the second story sounds ok with how kags will protect her friend but im not really into the whole rape sex stuff. so i lyk the first story better. i cant wait to read it! ^_^ :) ^.^ =)

Please please please please please update.

I love this story.

even though you did put up two copies of the same chapter,it was still a worth while read.
so don't worry;i enjoyed it.at least she was able to move on,and he realized what an idiot he is.
good luck on the next chapter.

I LUV the Twist About Kagome Staying w. Kouga!!!! Very Inventive!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Kagome-Chan

oohh. hope kouga doesn't get creamed.

This is getting good. Update soon

please you have to update as soon possible you got my mind going crazy with whats going to happen next

Dun dun dun! Wow, tons happened in that chapter, it was awesome!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! update, update, update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! I gotta know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am so glad you updated. I was waiting for him to find out that she withdrew from the job before he was with her. I just hope she really makes him work to get her back. Although I do not think what he did was rape, it was really horrible and showed what a cruel person he can be. He needs some anger management. I would like to receive updates for your stories. I know that I am reading at least 2 of them now, so please put me on your update list. My email is kindred3000@hotmail.com.

love your story. please add me to your mailing list . . . thanks :)

please update soon i love this story and want to no what will happen to kagome when sesshomaru finds out she can't work for him

this story is awesome i would like it greatly if i could be added to the mailing list. tokeachey14@yahoo.com

I really love this story and I'm always looking forward to a new chapter. Please keep writing and if you don't mind to put me in your mailing list. It would be great. Keep up the good work :)

hi id like to be added to when you let us know when a new chapter is out
my email is anime_fan141@yahoo.com
this is a great story and i deffently cant wait for more. :)

i really love your story! although im a bit confused as to why sesshomaru said all that stuff and then raped her

i really love your story! although im a bit confused as to why sesshomaru said all that stuff and then raped her

can u put me on ure mailing list please?

i really love your story! although im a bit confused as to why sesshomaru said all that stuff and then raped her

can't wait till the next chapter, is she pregnant?

i love this story and can not wait for you to post the next chapter! please dont leave us waiting too long! i am dying to know what sess does when he finds out about kags! oh and please add me to your alert list please and thank you!

The Quad
love the story, please add me to mailing list.
respectfully,
Sandy

Hi, I would like to be on the list :)
send it to priss_kimio@yahoo.de. Thanks

Can u add me to ur mailing list? Thanks! I like ur fics! They're awesome!

I'd really love to be on the mailing list!
my email address is:
demonika713@yahoo.com

hi would like to be put on your mailing list my email address is:

smoochy5251990@yahoo.com

I. Love. You.
I'm actually writing this review in school, and holy friggin' crap. The chapters so far are... wow. A definite turn-on. I keep minimizing the screen and looking away 'cause I'm so embarrassed by what Kagome and Sesshomaru are doing. *Squeal!* I love you! Marry me, please?!

Wowza.
I had never read this fic before because it never really registered on my radar. But damn if I don't wish this fic wans't blazing the first time I came across it! The Quad is an awesome piece. You've done a marvelous job of stringing my emotions along right there with the characters'.

Thank you for sharing~
Kyuthe

Great story.. left in a good spot to bring the reader back to wanting more... i cant wait to see sesshomaru's face when he is told the truth adn what he will do to get her back.. I love your story.. keep up the good work.

I an't wait when Sesshy and his father hear about this!!!!

For a minute there you lost me.
I was staring at the screen like "huh?"
I mean I was so confused as to why he all of a sudden turned into Dr. Jekyl and Mr. Hyde on her. He was straight trippin. Lol. But I got it. He pretty much thinks she slept her way to the top. *sighs* Dummy. Had she not made it clear she didnt want it to seem like that? *shrugs* I might have to go back and reread, but Sess was an ass.

Hugs Inuyasha. He's such a good boy.

Poor Kagome, but to me it seems like she fell in love quick. Whatever, sometimes when we write stories that's what happens.

Anyway, enough of the long review, love the story and can't wait for your next update

good chapter.
it was worth waiting for to see what happened.
good luck with the next one.

D: That was so sad... D: Update! I want to know if she re-enrolls!

Please please update soon, can't w8 2 c Sessho's reaction when he realises the truth!

OMG that was so good! please dont keep us waiting so long for the next update! i can not wait to see what sess does when he sees kags knowing what he did!

omg!!!!! more more more more more more more more

plase!!! wright more soon!
i dont know how long i can wait!!!

gahhh its amazing!

About time Kagome told someone. I was wondering if she would keep all that bottled up and suffer. So when will the others find out and what about Kaede? Will she continue working there or will the angry pup fire her once he finds out Kagome withdrew? Keep up the great work.

Ok, please don't have us wait too long. This is killing me.

i luvvvvv this fanfic its my fav.!
plzzz update as soon as possible
thnx.! :)

Wow, that was a quick update. Thanks!
I definitely like this chapter. I'm so excited just thinking about what will happen next. Take care! ^-^

I'm happy that you found a beta, I would have offered but damn if I don't have a lot on my plate right now! Great chapter, it's so tense to watch as things progress! I can't wait for the next update!

Great story I love the way you are portraing inuysha. Not so sure about the whole Sesshomaru thing though. Keep writting and please update soon.

I like this story, but I was hoping that Sessh would find out that she dropped out of the race for the job this chapter. That is what I am waiting for, and I have no patience.

Yea an update. Sess is an ass. Hope Kaede tells Sesshoumaru soon. Next chapter maybe?

awe. Inuyashas not an asshole in this fic. I'm glad :]
I still want to kick Sesshoumaru in the nuts, though.
update soon!
:D

tell ur betta 2 hurry up!i need another chap!!!!!and my computer is acting funn latley so if u dont get this......mie bad!!!!!!!!!^_^
ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!

no problem.

This story is amazing! I couldn't stop reading after the first chapter! I really hope you find a beta soon cause I can't wait for your next update.

.. ok i'v been patient ... its been almost a month since i last read a chapter of the quad..'sept for today to see if you updated and i did not know.... and i am BEGGING you to put out a new chapter!!! PLEASE ..... its just not fair when your really in to a story and have to wait a prolonged amount of time for the next bit... kinda like the twilight books ... sooo good but such a long wait!!! .. anyways please update soon!!!

Tied things nicely is meant for ending a chapter.....and this was far from ending it...a cliffhanger,and it's been almost 3 weeks since anything new.
Please,don't forget this story.
You've got a good storytelling mind.And express it so well.
Good luck.

WTF?! That was not what I was expecting in this chapter. HOWEVER, I appreciate the change in pace. I also needed a break from the gushy romance stories which you gave. Thank you so much for ending the chapter the way you did, you tied things up nicely. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter

please please update soon!! i cannot wait to read what happens next!!!

WoW, i cant wait for the next chapter...

I cannot believe Sess. I wanna know how hge's gonna make this one up to Kagome. I think it's gonna be a while befoire he gets some again.

OMG this story is so good! Its so original and i love that, good stories like your's are hard to come by! please dont keep us waiting too long for that next update, i can not wait to see what sessy does when he realizes he was an idiot!

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!

cliff hanger! please update asap :D

Will he find out the truth next? He was truly being an ass. Typical Sess.

oh,and what a cliff!
I can't wait to read the rest.
Please hurry,but not so to make mistakes.
You're doing well.

castrate him!!!

THis story is so goooood! But its been awhile thanks for updatin keep up the good work

THis story is so goooood! But its been awhile thanks for updatin keep up the good work

Please update soon! This last chapter was very well written. I felt my eyes starting to tear at the cruel words spoken to Kagome. I can't wait to find out what happen's next.

No! It cant end there! How could you do that? Please hurry and post your next chapter soon!

Its so sad but if she leaves early and he doesnt get her he desrves it for being an ass.

this story is soo freakin awsomeee
please updaate sooon :]

you must update ASAP you hear me !!!!!! you cant do this to a girl.... clifhangers are so unfair!!!!!

I don't think i have felt such a range of emotion in such a short span of time in a LONG TIME...at first I was shocked, then upset, then sadden...by the time this chapter was over I was just stunned. Only a great writer can take her readers on the ride as the characters and really feel what they are going through...Kudos to you...Now to let Sessho find out what a mistake he has made...sigh...I can only imagine the Angst we are going to feel in the next few chapters....I look forward to them...

Up date tommorow!!! I love this story. Ja ne.

Up date tommorow!!! I love this story. Ja ne.

HA! Serves him right that chowder head. But poor Kagome I hope Kikyo & Sango get her to open up so they can help her. But poor Kaede, I hope she doesn't get fired. That would suck.

Well, looks like Sess really can’t distinguish between personal and business after all. I mean, what if Kagome took his words that he is able to distinguish the two at face value and hadn’t withdrawn her application, and then he went around and treated her like dirt for placing her trust in him. That would have been wicked as well. Now, I certainly hope you won’t make her forgive him easily or quickly. When somebody does things like that, one just doesn’t get back together with them soon (if ever) no matter how sexy they are.

Can’t wait for the next chapter (*hint* hurry up * hint*) as I really wonder how you’ll resolve this one without making Kagome pathetic. (Just so you don’t take this in the wrong way, I really like your story so far; I just wouldn’t like it to be ruined by pathetic Kagome, as I like it when she is portrayed as strong and feisty like you did at the beginning of your story).

Wow, that was a twist I didn't expect. I can't wait until he finds out she dropped way before that date. It's going to be so beautiful when he realizes just what he's done...ah, the beauty of angst...

Well, looks like Sess really can’t distinguish between personal and business after all. I mean, what if Kagome took his words that he is able to distinguish the two at face value and hadn’t withdrawn her application, and then he went around and treated her like dirt for placing her trust in him. That would have been wicked as well. Now, I certainly hope you won’t make her forgive him easily or quickly. When somebody does things like that, one just doesn’t get back together with them soon (if ever) no matter how sexy they are.

Can’t wait for the next chapter (*hint* hurry up * hint*) as I really wonder how you’ll resolve this one without making Kagome pathetic. (Just so you don’t take this in the wrong way, I really like your story so far; I just wouldn’t like it to be ruined by pathetic Kagome, as I like it when she is portrayed as strong and feisty like you did at the beginning of your story).

OMG! What a awful and wonderful cliffhanger! I can't tell you how much I want you to update like now, but I'll be patient. Great chapter, oh the drama! Keep up the fantastic work!

Oh how I hope you don't have it take years to figure out he screwed up big time. Have Keade tell him what happened and then have him realize he's is BIG TROUBLE.

Man...this story get better and better even though it would be interesting for exp like if kagome was still feeling sad and hurt just wanted to die but then a stranger appears offering a new life for her making her into a vampire which she says yes......I think it would be interesting if the story turn out something like that but hey your story is good I hope that you'll do another one cause I like reading romance stuff about vampires and werewolves

OMG!!!!!! You have got to update soon this story is so good.......I cannot wait to read how Sesshoumaru is going to react.

oh man Sesshomaru is so going to want to kill himself when he finds out what he did. I wanted to cry for Kagome that was just so mean of him to just assume something like that. now the big question is will he find out he more then huge mistake before Kagome leaves? and how in the world would he make it up to her? oh Kami I hope she didn't get pregnant since no protection was used. update soon please I'm just dieing to know!!!!!!

WOW! THE ENDING SURE EXPLAINED EVERYTHING!!!!!!

Loving the story and keep it going!!!

Liz

Great chapter! Hey, did Sesshomaru know that she wasn't postuled for the job with him anymore? Hm. Well, it's becoming interesting. *grin* I can't wait for the next chapter. please please update soon!!!!

Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter! Always a pleasure to read this story, thank you for writing it! Keep up the great work!

Hello, I love this story. Hope you post the next chapter soon. So far this is the second fanfic by you that I've read and I really love them both. Sorry if this is alittle lame. This is the first review i've ever really did.

I love where this story is going...I would be more than happy to beta for you!

Hey JosieKnox. I'm really interested to see where your fic goes. I see you need a beta reader before you continue. Have you checked out the beta readers page? I'm sure if you ask one of them they may be able to help. Hope to see something soon. n8tivegurl

it just requires another read thru.
so far,i did that,and i got it.
she wants the relationship,but she doesn't want to look like a gold digger,or she doesn't want things to look bad for her if things don't work,and not being his student,in her eyes,would help ,or maybe so she thinks.
but so far,i like this.please write another chapter as soon as you can.
take care and good luck.

Josie, don't worry about Chapter 6, just write it down as rough as it has to be. Sometimes if you just get it on paper, or the computer, it will then work itself out. Or you can beat the crap out of it. That won't make the story any better, but you'll sure feel good. I look forward to seeing Chapter 6 cuz you write a good story. ;>

Take your time. I'd much rather wait for a well-written chapter than have you throw one out there to appease your audience. I know how stubborn stories can be. I went a year without writing a single word on Moving Forward. Any fellow writer will tell you that it's best to keep writing, even if you throw it away. But any good writer will tell you not to post what you've written until you're comfortable with it. Hang in there. The story will come. This is a good story and I look forward to updates when they happen.

So-let me get this straight. Kagome is transfering to another Uni because she wants a relationship with Sesshoumaru? But they barely know each other. Or is she moving because she doesn't like how things were going. I'm really confused. Maybe I have to keep on reading for me to understand the story. Great job thought. I like Sesshoumaru but not his conquests. =). I just hope Kagome knows what she's getting herself involve with. I wouldn't like to see her suffer. But suffering is one of the ways we learn from or errors, right? that's what my family thinks. Lol. Great job once again. Update soon. I wonder what Sesshoumaru's reactions going to be when he receives Kagome's letter. I can't wait. Update soon. Please.

Love, love, love this fic. However, Im kinda afraid of how Sess will react to her leaving. Hmmm?

i liked it . i liked how u portrayed the cheracters. is there any way u could contact me when you update?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

so glasd that u update i wonder what sesshoumaru will do when he finds out about kagome i bet he will get really mad please please updsate soon

so glasd that u update i wonder what sesshoumaru will do when he finds out about kagome i bet he will get really mad please please updsate soon

good girl, Kaggy!!!!
Sess's gonna be pissed but Kag won't care....then again Sess won't care WHY she did what she just did......I wonder if Sess will have to hunt Kags down....

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

This is unique and pretty funny. I like the imagery and the portrayal of the characters, no matter how *cough* perverted they may be. Keep up the awesome work.

~EOS~

I love this chapter, definitly a spicey chap. Can't wait for the next. Hope to see an update soon.*HINT HINT*

aww. I agree with Kagome that it would be too risky for her to be his assistant, but to transfer? It's not like there is another college around the block that she can go to. right?

This story is hot! You are doing a great job, keep it up!

Interesting developments so far, some predictable, some not. It seemed almost odd how easily she accepted Sesshoumaru's advances despite how 'innocent' her friends considered her. However, the virginity story did give us insight on how she isn't as pure as we thought. I'm interested in how their relationship will develop. Great job.

The two possible stories sound very interesting. I must say, however, I'm more interested in the 2nd fic's development and resolution. Dark fics aren't my particular favorites, but it's always good to change genres once in a while. I have a feeling it might be quite angsty and depressing, but I am hopeful that it might have a positive resolution. If not... then perhaps the first fic would be better?

i really love this story. pervy Sesshomaru is great!

i like the sound of captured

This is getting hot, I can't wait to see how she acts while working for the sexy demon. While hoping beyond hope trying to keep her composer.

That was a really good beginning. Update soon and keep up the good work.

OOh wow! Your story is so interesting! Please oh please update real soon. I'm gonna go read your other story now.

Later.

the 2nd story sounds interesting it has my vote!

I love this fic. Its great! I cant not wait for more it is definately in my top five favs. please write more.

i so glad that u update the story i just was waiting and u update and i'm so so so glad that u update and i votek for story #2

i so glad that u update the story i just was waiting and u update and i'm so so so glad that u update and i votek for story #2

This is an awesome fic! As for the votes, I like story number 2 best. I'm into that kinda stuff.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!

I can't wait for more!
*fans myself*
What I wouldn't do to be Kags right now!

You are a wonderful writer - I can not wait for more!
~Sandreline

K i would have to say story #2 definetely! I love stories like that. But i love it. This story is so good! Please keep up the good wrk. Thanx

i like story 1 better it seems a bit less depressing

I enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter and to see what else you have in store.

I would also like to vote for Story 2 Untitled. I hope it gets more votes. I really enjoy dark fics and want to read it ASAP! ;) Thanks for the chapter, can't wait to see which story wins!!

i really love what you've wrote so far and i hope you update soon!
oh and i vote for Captured and even if untitled comes up first i'll read that one too....but still im really excited captured ;D

please write more

I enjoy your writing. You have much room to improve.

Though, I find that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are moving way too fast. With the way you had first portrayed Kagome, I would have expected her to be on her guard until obtaining the assistant job, then having Sesshoumaru break down her barriers.

it was nice write some more.

I would like story #1 best.

Great update! As usual ^.^ and because I'm sick and sometimes demented I think Story 3 2 sounds interesting ^.^

I'm feeling Captured a little more then the other.

story 2

Hey, love the story...quite a concept. I think you should go with the second idea...the untitled one, but I'm glad you're wrapping up some of your other writing first! keep up the good work! :)

PLEASE UPDATE THIS AND YOUR OTHER FIC I LIKE THEM BOTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That is so sexy and cute! One of the more better fanfictions I've ever read. Good grammar and the dialogue has me hooked.

I love it XD it's hilarious! Keep up the good work!

please write more

:o! Good, but short! Make more! Now. Please?

loved it plz continue.SOON!!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter. This is starting to get interesting! I wonder what plans you have for Kagome and Sesshomaru, and what twists to expect for this story.

freky lol please keep writing,i really like it and how you made real good mouth motions and everthing please keep up the good work.
Sharilynn

That was great i can't wait until the next chapter. His personality in this chapter reminds me of a vampire. Dark in a very revealing way! If you know what i mean...

chaos

LOVE THAT!

sounds good, don't forget about ur spell checker thou.

Loved it, can't wait to read the update, plz update soon.

:o!

I really enjoyed your story. It sounds interesting, I can't wait to read what you have planned next.

...You need to update this. Seriously. You also need to update "Deception". Because your stories are like a drug, and I am very much addicted.

nice story cant wait to see what else u will come up with

OMG! I'm soooo hooked! More so then Deception! You have to update soon! I wanna see how Kagome will react when they meet. They are gonna meet right? lol

AND THEN!?!?!?! WELL YOU CANT JUST END IT. COME ON!!! WRITE MORE IM BEGGIN YOU!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ!! IM A GOOD MOTERVATER!! watch PLEASEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ IF YOU WRTE MORE YOU'LL GET A COOKIE!! YOU KNOW YOU WANT THE COOKIE!!!

Good start, can't wait to seewhat happens next.