so sad!!....more chapters please!!

this is awsome!!..more chapters please!!

more chapters please!!!..ths is to good to wait for..

this is awsome!!!..more chapters please!!!

how come on cursed twuns chaper 3 and 4 are the same please send me a reply

The beginning of a great story, can't wait to see how it unfolds..

Um... it is a really good story so far but...ya kinda of accidently posted that first chapter twice in a row. Heh I understand that you did it on accident. But I like the story so far, most of the time people just throw Kagome and Sesshomaru in bed together the first chapter. 'sigh' I am rambling again. Good job!!!

hmmm, where to start...
i love your idea, it's new and yet not crazily out there like some fanfictions can be. simple, yet complex. and your writing style makes sense!! i can honestly say that i love you for that. i spent my entire night yesterday looking for a good fanficiton and all i could find were stories that i've read a dozen times by other authors and with people writing them that i swear have never seen a spellcheck in their lives. not to mention they have no grammar skills (at all. and i'm serious, these stories were bad *cringes*) so imagine my joy when i found your story!!!
i really like it and i hope that you continue as soon as you can. heck, even if this review doesn't help encourage you to write on...i hope it at least brightens up your day a little :D
P.S
i love how you mentioned in your authors note that there was no love between kag/ses yet. it seems that way too many stories have their characters fall madly in love for no reason way too soon in the plot.
P.S.S
why do you have the same chapter posted multiple times?

yours truly,
Jody

that was so asome can not waite for you th up date

i love it.

wow i cannot whait for you to up date plessssse up date soon