| it's been awhile... have you abandon us.... please let us know if you are still writing.... if you are writing still, please update.... thanks
| it's been awhile... have you abandon us.... please let us know if you are still writing.... if you are writing still, please update.... thanks
Azera- Tue 25 Mar 2008
| cool story so far, I hope you update soon!
rowdysgirl- Sun 08 Jul 2007
| are you ever going to continue this story?
elvira- Sat 30 Jun 2007
| holy shit poor her thats scary as hell..trust me cuz ive gone out with a gangster...and have protection form his and his bro gang is scary...anyways more chapters please!!!...
| update update update please
| update update update please
rowdygirl- Fri 27 Apr 2007
| hey! i'm here, where r u? it's been soooooo long since you've updated and i can read these 3 chapters only so often. if i read this again i'll be able to recite it!!! this is such a good story and i am so very hooked on it... please have a stroke of inspiration and update.
| update update update please
Rowdygirl- Mon 26 Mar 2007
| This has got to be one of the best written stories I've read yet! Both technically and the story itself is captivating - even at 3 in the morning. And I've been thinking about it all day. You have got to finish this. It's too good not to finish. I will do anything, anything to help you finish. I am, of course, thinking along the lines of nagging and badgering you. Please update soon.
rowdygirl- Mon 26 Mar 2007
| This is a really great premise. I like the way you're building the story. I can't wait for the next installment.
| update update update please
Addah- Tue 06 Feb 2007
| please update soon.
| update update soon please
| i love it. please update soon.... and email me when you do please
Kat- Sun 31 Dec 2006
| oOo, Kougas been a naughty boy, offering to show kagura a 'real' demon when he's engaged! tsk tsk. So like Kouga. More story please?
Crow- Sun 31 Dec 2006
D: I was hoping there was another chapter, and much to my dismay.. there wasn't!
This is such a great fanfic, I can already tell by the first chapter, nothing seems cliche, and I love that! ^^ Please try to post the next chapter soon! I'll be waiting for it!
| yay... update..... great third chap... hope to see more soon.....
google- Sun 31 Dec 2006
3 i really like this fanfic
please update soon
:]
Vulcana- Sat 30 Dec 2006
| Good Chapter. I like how Koga doesn't immediately go after Kagome as he does in many other stories. I also liked how descriptive you were when describing the apartment.
| so when will we see chap 3....
Triv- Fri 08 Dec 2006
| I cant wait to read more of it
orchid- Fri 10 Nov 2006
| loved the ending of chap 2.... the little intro kag did with kouga.. it was cute in sarcastic way... hehehehehe
brooke- Sat 04 Nov 2006
| haha.....lol. i love this story sooooooo much! it's one of my favorites. my friends say they can actually see me picking up a rock and throwing it at someone who pissed me off. (they had to hold me back from throwing one at my principal, but thats another story^_^ ') anyway....keep writing! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!
Wow! That's a well writen story! I'm very much impressed! I sometimes think there won't be any really good story out there to read, but yours has potential. I hope you continue with this story; it's well worth the wait.
Yuki O_O
mangadreams- Sat 04 Nov 2006
| great chapie
I like it but wonder if Kouga will beome a heated suitor to Kagome and how Sesshoumaru will become interested.
Please update soon!
I like it.
-Dani.
AnimeFanime18- Sat 04 Nov 2006
| I command you to update and soon!
helikesitheymikey!- Sat 04 Nov 2006
So...Fluffy already is interested in Kaggy??? I bet by the end of the 30 days he'll be down right jealous!
LET THE PLOT THICKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*lightening flashes in spooky background while a scary cd bought at big lots plays in the background*
PLEASE UPDATE MEGA SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
orchid- Thu 02 Nov 2006
| are u going to update
Aly- Sat 21 Oct 2006
| this is a really, really suspenseful beginning! i love it! keep up the great work!
Misty- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| Cool! I like it! Please update soon!
orchid- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| great first chap.....don't keep up waiting long for the next......
helikesitheymikey!- Wed 18 Oct 2006
COOL!! This should be VERY interesting!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous- Wed 18 Oct 2006
Interesting start, though I do hate cliffhangers. You might want to try and avoid them it's extremely mean to your viewers.
Sincerely, Anonymous
Vulcana- Wed 18 Oct 2006
I think this is a really neat start
Good job
bay- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| Love the story line, hope you update it soon.
arika- Wed 18 Oct 2006
(Don't mind spelling errors!)
I like this it's great so far! I like how it went straight into the action and how detailed you are. Plus id doesn't seem to be soppily thrown together like other stories of it's kind. I can't wait for the next chapter!
mangadreams- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| luv the start. really interesting!
Shaedow- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| This is really interesting! I hope you update soon. Keep up the great work!
j.b.- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| wow!!
jasmine- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| wow!! that was a grate chapter pleas write more!!!!
atsida- Wed 18 Oct 2006
| i like where the story's going.... hope you update soon...
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