so far, I've liked it. but 1: you need to work on your spelling and grammer. 2: you need to get your facts strait about vampires! (kikyo is not fine enough to be a vampire. And 3: just call the wench a clay pot. If you run out of things to call her, just repeat some of the insults at times.

This is the first fan fic Iv'e read of yours but i'm hooked because of the writing and the comentts that you made during the story I mostly LMAO the whole time I was reading.