Earth Unleashed WIP
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Hi everyone!
I'm not dead, I promise. It's been an insanely long time since I updated Earth Unleashed... but I found this on my computer. It's still a WIP and... wow it's been at least a year since I've worked on this. I touched up a bit... it still looks off to me.
I would appreciate all sorts of tips/suggestions to make this piece better.
As for the story, it was a hit and miss for some people. I'm still too busy to update for now... Work and school... you know how that is! I WILL finish all my stories... eventually.
Thanks for your time!
PS - I used to go by penname "JadedRayne" and I've changed it to Jade R. Rayne.
I'm not dead, I promise. It's been an insanely long time since I updated Earth Unleashed... but I found this on my computer. It's still a WIP and... wow it's been at least a year since I've worked on this. I touched up a bit... it still looks off to me.
I would appreciate all sorts of tips/suggestions to make this piece better.
As for the story, it was a hit and miss for some people. I'm still too busy to update for now... Work and school... you know how that is! I WILL finish all my stories... eventually.
Thanks for your time!
PS - I used to go by penname "JadedRayne" and I've changed it to Jade R. Rayne.
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23.01.2015 05:42:37
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I'm assuming that Sesshomaru is holding Kagome's gun (since he's got his swords and her holster looks empty).
One piece of (hopefully) constructive criticism: Sesshomaru's pony tail seems really light of hair, since what is on top of his head implies that there should be a lot more of it in the tail. Perhaps a few more stands should be added to the ponytail to fill it out?