This was funny, I liked it and what a jerk our little Sesshoumaru is...good job very cute
*snickers* just wait til he gets on her bad side when she's having her PMS....that'll be interesting. any chance you'll continue?
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Oct 2008
Seemed a bit off to me, but I did like the basic idea behind this one. Have you tried double spacing new paragraphs to get them to space further apart? And I would recommend not using blue text, it makes it hard to read. Non the less it was an interesting read and I think you are the first to have her as a limo driver.
I think this could be expanded with future chapters. I always enjoyed having them banter. I second the spacing suggestion. The blue text doesn't bother me.
Good job!!!
lol. that's too funny. very cute. good job.
sugar0o (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Oct 2008
that work under him comment has my gutter brain doing flips. :p this was interesting.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Oct 2008
Looks much better with the fixes Chaos, love him raising the window too, very cute. :)
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