aghhh! My heart. It bleeds! *crumple* Thanks for the story and the happier reunion. :)
Gracie, you've moved me to tears. I cried the whole damn time reading this. It was so beautiful, and I wish that it could just continue!
It has been a long time since a story has made me cry, you are a wonderful author. I'm glad they found each other again!
NO, I DIDN'T NEED MY HEART TO REMAIN INTACT, THANK YOU.
That was painfully beautiful, thank you for ending it the way you did.
I purposely logged in just to leave a review on this. Your story made me cry three times. It was so sad and so beautiful. I haven't enjoyed a story on here as I did yours in a long time. Thank you for that.
It was so sad but it was sweet at the same time I love it
I really like your little one-shot. I think it shows true dedication and love. How he looked out for her any way he could and then his patience paid off in the end. That was nice that Kagome's reincarnation remembered and that she recongized him. It is sweet that as soulmates, hers found his later on. Cute and moving :)
That's a beautiful story - it made me cry! I love the memories that you chose to share of Sesshomaru and Kagome's life together, and how Sesshomaru was able to find purpose and healing afterwards.
Oh my god!!!! I read this at work and let me tell you it was very VERY DIFFICULT NOT TO BREAK DOWN AND CRY!!!!! What a beautiful story you made, I dont think anyone could have written any better. I seriously have no words...it is just beautiful and tragic, and sweet, and bitter all at the same time!! I... its just wonderful, amazing , and a real pleasure to have come across this great piece of work. Congratulations, it take a lot to impress me, let alone for me to even comment on something and your little story definitely deserves the highest praise!!! (Bows down respectfully to autor) :-)
You made me tear up there! I really loved this. It was so well done.
This story was so beautiful. Despite the sadness, I am glad you ultimately allowed Kagome to find Sesshomaru again and thus have the happiness they both deserved.
so sweet.
You made me cry!!!
but that was such a heart wrenching beautiful story!
i love it so much!
“How selfish will you be, Inuyasha? To make a man live when he has nothing to live for.”
That.....
That line killed my heart.
*moment of silence*
I've written a story (Masked Truth) where Kagome is 'killed' during battle, but her body is gone. Sesshomaru lived to her time and watches her grow up and finally...it was time for her to return to the feudal era for one last time. Of course, the ending was different where she appears in the modern era alive...but...what I'm trying to say is...that the angst and emotions are well captured in this one-shot. I love how you've made Kagome so loveable and precious to our Sesshomaru-sama.
My heart clenched so many times as I read through the journey Sesshomaru went to protect and look after Kagome while she grows up.
That final scene when he sees her jump through the well for the last time....was devastating for me! I, as a reader, felt my heart torn by this...because I felt like I was also on this journey with Sesshomaru and watching over this Kagome.
You've definitely done an amazing job with the flash backs. You were able to tell the story of the beginning and end...in one chapter.
I was so enchanted by the image and words you've written. Every word held so much meaning...
Thank you for writing such a lovely piece and I wish you luck on your other stories!
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