I absolutely love your story. It's one of the best I've read. It flows very nicely and there are almost no choppy parts, a few spelling accidents here and there but nothing enough to distract from the story. Very nice. I also like how you started it with a futuristic tone. I think you're one of the few authors who've captured what Sesshoumaru would be like after 500 years. *Yay brownie points for you* I look forward to the next chapter. ~Have a wonderful week.

Loved the ending of this chappie!!! and you are right, only a man would ask such a silly question... lol ~.^ it is one of the mysteries of us females... I suppose its the same with how guys can roll out of bed, not brush their hair and still look drop-dead sexy...ne? lol You had me laughing so hard at that one!!! keep 'em comin'... :D

review re: Ch. 9 (Compress and Foundation). First off let me preface by noting that I have been generally enjoying the story so far - it's a unique premise that I haven't seen done before. As for this chapter, however, I did feel that the tone of the chapter was a bit discordant with the tone of the rest of the story. Well really it was mostly the attempt at flippant humor at the end of the chapter that seemed jarring to me. Perhaps it is because Kagome was so distraught prior to speaking with Shippo, and then all of a sudden she's up and out of bed ready to go on a date with Sess and making jokes about how easy it was to get ready. I don't want to overstate my criticism here but suffice to say that (for me at least) the whole bit re: "all girls can magically appear fine with a bit of makeup" was unnecessary to the story and took away from the flow of the story. Maybe it's just my skepticism since if I were crying for days straight I can guarantee a bit (or even a lot) of makeup wouldn't hide it. (Darn sensitive skin!)

ok this is the best story ever. please update i loved your story. o and you the first fanfiction i've read with hardly any spelling or grammer mistakes. yay for you. oh and i want to know if you are a boy or a girl. if you want to know why i want to know its just because of how well you write.

cute *^_^*

the story was good, a bit annoying how kagome is so weak after her past experiences though and how sesshoumaru acts out of his 'coldness' so fast. but it's still a good job.

Im extremely Curious to find out how this 'Date' Goes! Post again soon. Its great!

i love your story so far, its very good and well put together. I am very interested in reading more of your work. Keep up the good work and happy writing.

Very good. Thanks!

Awww! This chapter is so sweet. how Shippo showed up in her bed like old times. Will she run into Kouga and Ayame? Sesshy in a suite lucky girl. I can't wait to see how it all turns out. Mana seems to know more than she lets on, I really like her. I can't wait to see what happens next. Becareful not to rush your story. Excellent! Write on! Much Love InuAngel Oh, question, will the lab people try to over ride Sesshy and take Kagome back?

I love this story so much. I find it very original. Keep up the good work!

this story is great, update again soon!

Very original and extremely enthralling. I do like the darker side of reality that Kagome is going through because of several reasons... 1.more tha likely humans would do to demonsand priestesses what is going on in your story 2.it will make what I hope will be a happy ending for Kags and "Lord Smart-ass" (lol) all the sweeter. Keep those chapters coming!

Awesome! Awesome! Is all I can say, well, very unique and refreshing, something really new! You go ConstantlyInconsistent! You ROCK! I have a question is Kagome going to try to kill herself, the last time she was depressed she hope Sesshy would do it? I can't wait to hear from Shippo. I'm glad Yash didn't die because he let Kikyo drag him into hell, he died insane but better than being forced into hell. Keep the updates coming. Write On! Much Love InuAngel

Awesome but a little melodramatic, but only by a tad. Still really good though.

Awwww! Kagome is all twitter-paited, not sure if I spelled right I heard that word on an old Disney cartoon, when a character was falling in love. Big mean, Sessy, saw it. He liked it! I love the ending, makes me want to hear more about these two. Keep up the updates, all I can say is that I'm loving it! Oh yeah, like you need your ego stroked, you know your good! ^_^ Write on! Much Love InuAngel

ohhhh a date ummmm , smerks lol anyway great chapter btw u should make it that kagomes personal goal is to find and free any more traped people like herself no mater what. lol just a dream i had last night lol, anyway dont stress ur self and enjoy that DATE.....cya

your story is really one of the best i have read so far... i'm totally kooked! :) i can't wait for the next chapter! please, update as soon as you can!!

Your fic is now listed under my favs! Excellent! I love the detail, the direction your story is taking. The title is exellent, I think fragile means a lot in this fic. Kagome's state of being, Sesshy's state as well and her family. I like the idea that if Kagome talks about Narku he will begin to return. Is that what you were suggesting, a chapter or two back, if not I apologise for missing the point and I will read it again, that is a pretty freaky idea. I saw a movie like that once well not like this but with that simialr idea the more the girl talked about the situation, the thing gained power and became real. Like the ancient gods, it's said the old Greek and Roman gods died, due to the fact that human no longer spoke of them or worshiped them, they got their strenght from the belief of humans. Pretty freaky and cool. Like I said if that's not what you meant let me know and I'll have to re-read it agian. Thanks for letting me know I boosted your confidence, there was no need I was just telling you the truth, your excellent! I am totally hooked! I can't wait for your next update. I do wish your chapters were longer, but why rush it or over do it, I only want them longer for my shelfish reasons, which is; your fic is like a good book, you don't want to put it down. Keep the chapters coming and keep enjoying what you do, you do it so well. Write on! Much love Inu Angel

This is completely unexpected. I will be honest when I read the summary I was not expecting to like this story too much. But being the every loving optimisic person I am I just kept reading and I am truly impressed. I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon.