Great, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
Susi8 (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Jun 2014
I like your story, it's well written. :) I can't wait to read more!!
:::hugs::: an update I'm so happy XD
My day was kinda bad but this made it all better
i waited till bed time to read it and now I am happy
to report that only Kagome could cause curiosity in
our dear Loard ;)
love the up date can't wait for the next one.
keep up the great work
naleah (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jun 2014
Aha!!!my guess is is corrwct (in my thought only) im not sure if is sesshoumaru that watching kagome and inuyasha behind the tree.
esperemos que Sesshomaru i don't tiene novia youkai
hopefully that sesshomaru idon´t have a youkai girlfriend
Nicole (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jun 2014
ok so just like ive said before i loved this chapter....i wonder how many more friends she's gonna make in demon society since it will probably confuse sesshoumaru even more :)
I loved Just as any other chapter I read. Im curious for the next chapters. Without InuYasha there who knows what Kagome may do :p . Till next chapter, I hope that my tablet will be charged by then..... Reading with the cellphone is hard.
April (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jun 2014
TO SHORT! Such a great fic and its chapters leave me like a man dyi g of thirst!
Ah I just realized! If Sesshomaru didn't let Inuyasha do this patrol thing normally, would Inu and Kagome be suspicious? If Sesshomaru never allowed Inu to patrol before or handle the Western matters, why wouldn't Sesshomaru send an emissary or someone else in his place (since he cannot leave)? Or does he trust Inu that much?
Also, I just realized this.....Kagome seems to be VERY emotional still-she cries a lot of Inu and the way he is treated and "accepted" into the youkai society, yet she is poised and graceful and respectful (Even while throwing insults). So I'm still trying to figure out her personality. Normally if someone insulted her species, herself, or her loved ones, she'd be all over that person no holds barrel. Now she seems to try to be a bit more calmer since she is attempting to receive the honor of Hime, so is she mostly behaving or is she truly more mature now? I can understand she outgrowing the screaming and such like she used to do with Inu but it seems she's completely changed then you see spurts of her former personality like when the Lady insulted Inu a couple of chapters ago......
Still cannot wait for more!
Really great chapter. I really love the concept of the novel that Kagome was reading. Also we found out who the mysterious shadow was although i had my assumptions to who it was. Looking forward for more chapters!
Oh Kagome, you so strange, I would've done the exact same thing. I loved this chapter can't wait for the next one keep it up!
OMG.
I think I love you.
*drops down on one knee*
Will you, Maru-chan, become my...
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.... very own private fiction writer?
More! I need, I want! I must have!!! MARU-CHAN!!!!!!
*tear*
Pwease?
The explainings are clear and simple, that s good, mostly the explainings in other stories are confusing...
Im glad you wrote Kagome as an smart and observant person, and not a almost dumb naïve one. I will wait for the next chapter.
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