I'm glad to see things are ironning out well for the West. Kagome has gathered acceptance of Sesshoumaru's position and what it means. Sometimes decision will be made that she may not agree with but must accept if she is to be his mate. Sesshoumaru has learned to trust Kagome wholeheartedly. That means realizing that she was not going to run away from him because of every decision he makes that some would feel was ruthless.
I think they both have come to a deeper understanding of themselves and their relationship with each other and that is what manifested in this chapter. I'm glad to see Inuyasha finally get his happy ending. It was well deserved. Once again, Kagome stepped up and the respect she garnered from the ranks prove to be useful and motivating at the same time.
This was somewhat what she was hoping to achieve; a unity that would benefit all ranks. While some are still showing disapproval, the Sho, Gon, Tsu, Dai ranks have proven to be beneficial to her and her to them.
This entire story has been a journey for Kagome, Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and even the ranks. Everyone has benefitted in some way. I'm so sorry to seen this story end. I have never been disappointed with any chapter you have written. This will probably be one of my most favorite stories ever. I usually bookmark stories like this so I can go back and read them days, weeks, even months later.
Your character development has been on point this whole time. I have always loved Sesshoumaru's position in this story. He maintained his role despite his emotional concerns and that is important to me when you are playing with his character.
Kagome is always stubborn but determined when she is trying to achieve something. You highlighted that well. The love she has for friends and the motivation and drive to help them, despite her own feelings; this took us on a emotional rollercoaster ride. I don't think I have ever been this frustrated with Kagome's character ever.
This story has been been fun. I enjoyed going on this journey with you. You continue to prove your creativity and wonder in you other story "His Milestones". Yes, I've been following it. Can't help it you have me hooked on your writings.
I going to hate seeing that last chapter.
Great job. (^_^)
-Moonlight Rose
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