It well written, but other then that it's a dark concept. Sesshomaru taking revenge on Kagome doesn't fit his character.
ouch. and ouch... (shweew)
having read a few of your one shots i'm starting to think your maybe just a little mad at poor Kagome. Other wise it was dark, and well written. sad really. but well writtened and well thought out plot wise.
abc (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
lol its a bit of a dark fic... alot of angst and a totally new way of interpreting kag and sess's interaction/relationship. Its different but not bad. its good work =]
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
Interesting take from Sesshoumaru's POV. Well written, good descriptions, even a bit disturbing...LOL, nice job all in all!
wawa (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
This story has alot of shock value. It was good.
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