Hello Author. What an amazing story. I was really emersed in the emotions and cried along with her at times. Thank you for your hard work. Take care. <3 <3 <3

This is terribly well written - terribly, because it pulls you into thier path of grief and confusion, well written because you never let your readers fall into despair. There's a thread holding us up and letting us see through to the end of their loss. I also am fond about how you managed their attraction, never letting it fall into false love. Sometimes comfort is to be more cherished in a relationship than the more torrid emotions that love consists of. Thank you very much for this excellent short.

oh. my. god.

Breathtaking.

Wow that was so good. Very deep and the emotion really came through in your writing. 

Wow. That was deep.

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DAMN, THAT WAS A GOOD FIC!

This was amazing.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Bravo!

Nicley done! You may not be entirely hPpy with the way you wrote it, but I enjoyed it immensely!