This was beautiful. It's a work of art; right there with a Vermeer or a Monet. It has a striking imagery; every word roles of the tongue and adds a part to this unique piece that is necessary for its greatness. Every line, every word, it's all necessary to create the imagery and beauty that it is. 

I also enjoyed the story and its subject matter. I like that it wasn't a romance. Perhaps after my recent stints like reading Raise the Red Lantern and delve into arthouse cinema, I've come to appreciate tone and character more than I have plot. This is certainly, at least in my eyes, a tone piece. The thing I see the most here is tone, description. There is a plot, but not much and it just serves as a purpose to the words. There is character; Kagome's kindness and Sesshomaru's wryness. It is a beautiful piece, gorgeous in its words and use.

Thank you for sharing,

Rin-Ling

:'(

This was such an intense drabble. I mean, your detail was absoutely fantastic. It was so vivid and actually brought tears to my eyes at one point because of all the raw emotion. I absolutely love the story line you added to each prompt. I mean...who could have honestly thought that someone could actually create such a lovely story with so little words and completely suck me in. Ugh, you are amazing! 

Great job!!!

Wow, I missed a lot last night and I'm so glad you posted it in its entirety.  Poingnant and angsty.  Very good use of the prompts!

Interesting title.  I wish Sesshomaru would have stuck around to comfort her though.

Oh, such a depressing ending.  No one wins in this one.  But it was beautiful.  Thank you.

This was nice!