Dark, but an awesome story. I like how the wish was twisted around, and I especially liked the portrayal of kagome. I'm not gunna say 'new' because apparently her other side was just a feeble fasade ;3 . I see Sesshoumaru has found more then one use for our little miko (or can I not call her that now that she's not a virgin anymore..? hmm). For the club scene, all I can say is NICE. Heh heh heh. The bitch came into her own, literally. I'm pretty sure no one will mourn Hojo's passing. Personally, I laughed. Good job and please update soon!
Shade (Chapter 14) - Thu 22 Jan 2009
| loved the story can't wait to read more it was very good the plot was great
Wow, that was sick. Well written.
| Buahahaha! YES DIE HOJO DIE!!!............................................ Keep updating! I luvve this story! XD XD
taixishi (Chapter 12) - Sun 05 Oct 2008
| perhaps Kagome realizes that if they are successful in their quest (to un-do the "end of demons") that all events that have happened in the current timeline (including Hojo's death) will be negated. (my guess as to why she got over the murder so quickly, since regardless of what he did/said about her, she's not one to take needless death lightly).
| I think their plan is about to go to hell and back. Her manager may be the first one to demand her services. Heh.
Elenna (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Oct 2008
| Lol! Kagome is in for it now! Please update soon. I'm very eager to see his demon side play out to her game!
| i love this story! i cant tell you that enough!
| I loved reading the nakid Sesshoumaru scene. Hilarious. He deserved every bit of discomfiture he experienced. Him treating her as a servant through threats and pain makes me angry at him, though. I would really like to see her knock his ass across the room, especially each time he threatens a member of her family.
Dh7 (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
| Really enjoyed this story on A single spark and hope to enjoy more of it on dokuga
| This Sesshoumaru has no conscious. Earlier in the story he was ready to do what Naraku did to her family except for the torture part. He's just as heartless as Naraku but without the evil that corrupts the hanyou. But he was right in reminding Kagome that they're mission leaves her no time to mourn her grandfather. I just wish he'd been a little nicer about it and without threatening her family again. I'd like to see him be bothered by a newly gained conscious in the future. Yes, I agree, he's lost more than her, but it was partly his fault. If any love is to grow between them, he's going to have to develop a conscious and respect for her.
| i will never lie to you this one chapter has made me laugh more times then you can ever know, simply because you had Kags bludgen someone with a frying pan, hahahaha its a very strong visual image that i have in my mind that i have yet to forget, and i cannot wait for the updates to come from what happens later. you will always have a fan in me if nothing else but that reason. its fantastic, wonderful, and you deserve so much praise for the jay that you have continued to give me from this one moment in your fic, of coarse there are more but that one stands out most ALWAYS, hahaha frying pan!
utterchaos247 (Chapter 4) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| oo a sadistic sesshoumaru, haven't seen him in a while *^_^* really in character (though he might talk a lil much) update soon!
bell (Chapter 2) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| This story is very interesting so far. I hope that you keep up with it.
miss_darkness (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| this story is really good. i hope that u keep going with this. i would love to read more.
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