hi,,,,,,,,i think you should make a sequal,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,make it into a story ,,,,,more than a oneshot...................................................................tdaniel
I would like to see more on this, I think there are a lot of ways that it could go. I'd like to see the dynamic of her travelling with Sesshoumaru and whether or not the others will join her, as well as the potential for a relationship to develop between the two. I like how Kagome's character is closer to what she's like rather than her being over the top obnoxious or confrontational all the time. I'll be checking to see if it's updated further!