This story was great .At first I was upset that Kagome lost Shippo's mark on her forehead when she mated Sessh. I felt as his mother,especially after the blood ritual She should have kept all 3 marks upon her forehead with maybe the gold crescent moon as being larger. I also felt that there should have been a mention at least that they would all live the 500 yrs or at least that the human ones would take on the length of life that the youkai or hanyou (in Sango & Inuyasha's) they mated. I still can't believe that Kagome & Sessh had 100 pups & the comment their 1st pup made at dinner was hysterical.
This was great & I hope you continue to write so I can continue to read your writing
Okay I'm pretty sure I started reading this story a while back but I'm unsure if it was ever finished or it this story is the same,similar or a new version.
It's on this site & as its a Sessh & Kagome site, I've decided to be open minded & read it as if it's a new story since,I can't be sure of if its the same one I read before.
In this chapter there's been no mention of: Inuyasha, Kagome, Shippo, Sango ,Miroku & Kirara.There's also been no info regarding whether Naraku & his incarnations are still alive & causing death & destruction everywhere or if Nararku is still trying to turn everyone against each other so he can sit back & watch them destoy each other. As this is only ch.1 & Sessh's shiro/castle has been attacked, destroying a millenia of family treasures,collections & memories, along with the brutal death & rape of Rin,Jaken & those he trusted & cared for .............although I know he's overwhelmed,the fact that his 1st & only thought would be to blame Inuyasha's group seems
Ceysna (Chapter 22) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
This has GOT to be one of, if not THE, sweetest fic I've ever read. I really like it. Hope to see you write something more like it!
Rachael (Chapter 21) - Tue 16 Jun 2009
She's her own ancestor. 'Soo let's see, my great grandma was blah blah, my great great granma was blah, and my great great great great great grandma was actually me. heheh.' wow that would be confusing because it would make your mom one of your great great great great great grandkids. But It just makes this story that much better
Rachael (Chapter 15) - Mon 15 Jun 2009
so he is turned on by the fact that she looks like his mom, or is it more that he is intrigued by this sparking an interest?
| Hum... I started the story, and I really like it so far. I'm in chapter 5 actually, and I just wanted to point out to you a little mistake (a funny one actually lol)
you wrote 'coupe de gras' , it means... cup of grease, in French. litterally. lol. I think you meant 'coup de grace' ^_^
I'll leave a review for this excellent fic of yours once I'm finished, I just wanted to tell you this before I forgot. XD
Dewa mata
| that was wonderful just read it all, it was worth the wait and the lack of sleep, very interesting way to end the bad guy btw ^_^ though i kinda wonder what happened to Kouga and Kagura, maybe they could have mated. it would have cleaned everything up ^_^
| i Very much so love this fic. I think i read it before tho? Did you have it posted over on ass? any ways great job!
| i Very much so love this fic. I think i read it before tho? Did you have it posted over on ass? any ways great job!
(Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Sep 2008
| Yes, This is posted on A-S-S. I've cleaned it up a little bit, and there are a few things that have slipped...liked the grease aparently. Which is odd...because it was the only thing the spell check initially would allow through - coup de grace was red flagged. Shows how useful those things really are.
| Please hurry and fix the problem. Your summary got me all interested in reading your story.
| Yay!! Uploaded and delightful, just as it was when I first read it elsewhere. Hopefully, now that people can partake of its beauty, your ratings will climb to where they SHOULD be for such an involved, detailed, imaginative story!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
(Chapter 12) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
| YAY!!!! WM is here....now the party really can get started!!! You always make me feel better about my writing. Yes, story is coming up in bits and pieces, fits and starts, and should be completely up by end of day. Will also have up UnAdulteRated at some point....
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