Great.

To the person who left me an extremely rude review.  Number one, not ever detail must be addressed in a story.  He was overseeing the tournement because I wanted him to be.  The whole purpose of this story was not to have an excessive amount of dialogue.  If you didn't like that I'm sorry but that was not my purpose when writing it.  And if you carefully read it a second time you will see that what you are saying about Sess being the lord of the Eastern Land is completely false.  I even re-read to see if I indeed did make it sound like that but I didn't.  It says plainly that Amaya's mother and father are the Lord and Lady of the Eastern lands and it was their desire, through this tournement to attempt to get Sesshomaru to see and select their daughter.  I would have personally responded to you but however since you decided to review my story as annoymous clearly you did not have the balls to say this to my face.  Excuse my language.  Next time you want to berate an author on here, tell them personally and carefully read the fic before you pass judgement.  This may not have been the way you wanted this written, however I was fulfilling a challenge and trying something personally different for myself.  If you can't understand that you shouldn't review fics to begin with.  This is edging close to a flame actually, however you just go about your day and I'll go about knowing that I can write, despite your opinon and attempt to trash this story.  As well as the fact that you clearly haven't read anything else I've wrote so who are you to tell me I need 'A LOT of work'?

*~*Missy*~*