First I wan to say that your very brave. I wouldn't be able to post a story for other people to read. As for the story I would like to see how it goes. Keep up the good work. ^_^
Says this is a chapter story, but this is looking like a drabble. However, its not even a cliff hanger with a sentence that's not even finished. It's best to finish your sentence before posting the chapter. 
      
rose (Chapter 1) -  Wed 26 Jun 2013 
next chapter please 
      
mari (Chapter 1) -  Wed 26 Jun 2013 
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