Great start. Please continue. Just to say how good it is. I usually only read story that are over 5 chapters long already!! So this really interesting already!!
Jaded_butterfly (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Sep 2008
Very good beginning. I really liked it.
Nobody (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Sep 2008
i liked it. The flow was wonderful and very interesting idea. I can't wait for you to update.
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