me encanto  tu historia  esta mui bin hecha y tienes mucho potencial  tu histotia me cautibo de prinsipio a fin  y muchas grasias por escribirla y compartirla  
      
Kachina (Chapter 1) -  Wed 19 Jun 2013 
Story is just perfect. I loved it. Perfect ending too.  
      
tonya (Chapter 1) -  Wed 19 Jun 2013 
a very well-written story! this story caught my eye & i could not stop reading it 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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