HI , I LIKE THE PLOT SO FAR,,,,,,,I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE IT SO KAGS HAS ALL THE LORDS WANTING HER FOR THEIR MATE BECAUSE SHE WILL BE THE MOST POWERFUL FEMALE ALIVE ,,,,,,,BECOMING MORE POWERFUL THAN EVEN HIS OWN MOTHER WHEN IT IS DISCOVERED SHE HAS ANCIENT POWERS NO ONE HAS SEEN IN THOUSANDS OF YEARS,,,,LIKE THOSE OF THE FIRST INUYOUKAI WHO WERE DESCENDED FROM THE KAMI.MAKE SESSHOUMARU START FALLING FOR HER ,,,,AFTER HE SEES SHE WANTS NOTHING TO DUE WITH HIM ,SHE DOESNT SHOW ANY ATTRACTION TO HIM IN ANY WAY IN FACT SHE COMPLETELY IGNORES HIM AND WONT EVEN LOOKIN HIS DIRECTION AND ITS DRIVING HIM CRAZY BECAUSE HE WANTS HER TO NOT ONLY LOOK AT HIM,, HE WANTS HER AS ONLY HIS, TO BE HIS MATE BUT FOR THE FIRST TIME IN HIS LIFE HE WILL HAVE TO DO THE CHASING,,,,,AND WILL HAVE TO PROVE HIS WORTH TO HER..... IF HE HOPES TO HAVE A CHANCE TO MAKE HER FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM BECAUSE HE WANTS ONLY HER,,,,,AND HE WANTS HER FOR ETERNITY AS HIS ONE AND ONLY MATE .
I am interested in where you'll take this story, though it seems to be moving a bit too fast for me to fully enjoy. Also, I thought I'd mention that when I saw the title my first thought was "Lol, Pokemon reference," sorry. ^.^ Awaiting your next chapter and for Kagome to receive some righteous vengeance up in here.
UUUUUUUUUUUh.... I can barely wait!!!! Those two (WL and Kagz) seem to be an awesome (yet dangerous) tag team....and I love it!!!! Sesshy is gonna have his hands full, he will be misarable, and I will enjoy it!!! any ways, great chapter, I will be awaiting the next one very impasientely!!!
