loved it like always thanks.
I'm a big fan of Knight Rider, oils and new, so I squealed (my brother's ears are my witnesses) in excitement and was even more excited to read your story. I hope you update because and I would love to read more. 
Write lots and Have fun!  ~Sy 
      
I can't help but feel you should have left out him finding out about her past till later. Everything else is great, you need a beta though. Got a few grammar mistakes. Not my kind of story though. 
      
mari (Chapter 10) -  Mon 06 May 2013 
loved the update thanks. 
      
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