she could yell at him telling him what a bad father he was for ignoring rin for women xDDDD
That was awesome! 
Don't even think of altering it! You could blow it up into a huge 30 chapter monster and still come to the same ending, but this was great, and it cut the awkwardness of dealing with potential "step-sibblings" being attracted to each other blah blah blah.  
I seriously giggled out loud (alone in my home, and that usually creeps me out).  Thanks for the great short & to the point fic. 
Loved it!  
      
This was a great sory and I enjoyed it! 
      
I have a couple things to say about this Fic: 
1st: I was rolling in the floor laughing like a mad woman!! and 
2nd: I hope you continue this fic, bc it has a HUGE potential, so please dont end it here like this!!! 
Other than that soo far so good!!! =] 
      
Nelly (Chapter 4) -  Sat 20 Apr 2013 
That didn't last long, they at the beach for what, like 10 minutes? 
      
Nelly (Chapter 3) -  Sat 20 Apr 2013 
HAha she is super pissed, I can almost feel it through the computer. I would be too! 
      
Nelly (Chapter 2) -  Sat 20 Apr 2013 
Hhah the look they must of had on their face 
      
Nelly (Chapter 1) -  Sat 20 Apr 2013 
This story cracked me up! 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Apr 2013 
the kagome you portray is such an idiot, push-over, and can't even defend herself verbably, pathetic.  totally not the real kagome. the only thing you seem to keep is her temper. i don't thing i'll be reading any future updates of yours. your kagome sucks. 
      
Megan (Chapter 4) - Sat 20 Apr 2013 
REALLY!!???? You cant end it like that!!! It was just starting to get good!!! 
      
"Hey! What do you mean that's it?" :O Please continue writing T_T 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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