oooooooooo nice! 
naraku almost has a heart, so sweet. 
a few spelling errors ya might have to fix but other then that its awesome. 
keep up the good work. 
      
::slathers you in gallons of awesomesauce:: 
brilliant deary! 
freakin love it. 
this could well turn into an epic tale. 
      
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