i think this was a great beginning. lots of emotion in your words; it was heartbreaking, and the song you chose was perfect to fit the mood. will you choose to explain what happened to sess? i'm eager to see what happens next.

very interesting. I'm assuming that they are all humans....I mean I doubt an inu would be able to leave its mate and pup.....I can hardly wait to see where this story is going. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

You hyave done wonderfully so far, I can't wait to read more. Please update it soon.

Very good beginning. . .can't wait to find out more on their relationship. Please update Soon!!

Very dramatic. I love the way you started out. Please update soon:)

i love it