I love it! It's a bit different, but in a good way. Im wishing for a silver lining at the end,  because this story was left to our own imagination. I know Sesshomaru marked Kagome, but they were both under the influence of the moon. I hope to read similar works soon  
      
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I want a story pllllllllllease...... 
must......find......out......what......happens...... 
      
Lumi (Chapter 1) -  Fri 24 May 2013 
Quite a few of the sentences got chopped off at the beginning. 
      
Karmen (Chapter 1) -  Thu 23 May 2013 
Thanks for posting this I enjoyed it. I love to read some smut once in a while lol, it was very well written! 
      
thumper (Chapter 1) -  Tue 19 Mar 2013 
it's good! hopefully one day you can build a story around this, but it can stand on it's own for now. 
      
Hey, that was really nicely writted. Besides a few grammatical errors that can be fixed through a little editting, I think you've got a really great story here. I'd be glad to edit for you and hope that you decide to continue the story. I think this has potential to be more than just a one-shot. Good job and thanks for the good read.  
  
  
      
nicole (Chapter 1) -  Sun 17 Mar 2013 
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Fantastic. I must read more stories. I am a very honest reviewer and you deserve a positive review. 
      
I would like to see this continued. 
      
all fixed! and it was a good chapter! i'd really like to see more! 
      
This was good. 
      
Zeelian (Chapter 1) -  Sat 16 Mar 2013 
Wall of text critically hits for: Deathblow! 
  
Aka it seems your formating got lost somewhere along the line making the text impossible to read and keep track of. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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