Ok I admit it. At first I had my doubts. I'm not usually a fan for the whole role reverse thing with Kagome being the demon and Sesshomaru being the human. But as I kept reading, it's captured my interest and I believe I'm going to be a fan of this story! Hope you update soon!
I like where this story is going. But you have some mistakes throughout the two chapters you posted.
-There are spelling errors
-Incorrect tenses
And I suggest adding some more 'meat' to the story for a better flow. i recommend asking for a beta to help you with proofreading your story.
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