Nice, keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Great, keep it coming.

I read this story on fanfiction, I'm glad it's on this site so I can leave more reviews and other can read and enjoyed it, keep it coming.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

Seems interesting, a pity its lenght's don't gamble me leverage to say much more.

Seems interesting, a pity its lenght's don't gamble me leverage to say much more.

A nice start, however you might want to run it through a spellchecker and re-read it before posting, there was some random spelling errors, and also a few missplaced capital letters ("And" mid scentence). 

Congrats on starting your first story.  Keep up the good work.