Good one-shot; but there is room for more -- I want to know how Sango fits into this. You mention her once and Kag recognizing that Sess yells at her, but nothing beyond this. More info, please! I would like to see this continue!
Oh wow, this is good. Please continue it?? Maybe Sesshy sends her flowers, lots and lots of flowers after a few days along with a heartfelt letter.
THis is a great start, and I think there is definately room for more. I hope you continue:)
wow...I remember reading this when it was a oneshot..I thought it was starting to end different. it does make a good chapter story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
OOH. Lay it on him Kags, he deserves it. Hope you continue.
joyouki (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Aug 2008
awh man that was great...oh how i hate cliffies, but I would love a new chapter. OMG Sess submits to her, I love this side of him. I don't think I have read that before. I love it
Noacat (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Aug 2008
Oh, you so can't leave this as a one-shot! We need at least one more chapter! But I kid, you can leave it here or continue on, it is all up to you. But I'd totally love you forever if you wrote some more. ^_~
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