Love the story!! Kagome is such a cute fox!! thanks for updating so often :)

Hello Pristine!

It has been awhile since I posted a review for this story (because I normally can't wait until I get to an actual computer and end up just reading the chapter on my phone) so I wanted to let you know that I am still faithfully following this story. It is one of my favorites at this time, and everytime I see an update I read it almost immediately (even if I'm in class ^.^). Anywho, can't wait for the next installment. I've been enjoying the Kagome Sesshomaru interaction, so please more of them together!! 

Thanks,

Hush

I absolutely love Kagomes mischief and wild playfulness! :) Looking foward to more longer chapters and more updates and more quickly, plz ! lolzz, greed is my sin ;)

~Voracious 

OMG...nipping Sesshoumaru's ear X3

cannot wait to read more soon...their relationship makes sooo nice progress....and it's good that it goes step by step....that makes it believable

Right. So I haven't read a T rated fic (other than what Forthright has written) in a long time, and I have to say that I'm insanely glad I read this one. Your characterizations are the best I've read in a while, and the way you're telling this story makes me wish I had more to read - I actually got to this last chapter and felt a little disappointed that there was nothing else posted. 

I love the way you write this - the short sentences and the almost vague description of everyone's emotions. You aren't using too much detail, or trying to explain every little decision or every little action; you're letting the story explain itself, and I've got to give you kudos for that! I also adore the little bits about kitsune lore, as well as the youkai culture you incorporate into the story - it's nice to see the pack mentality done in a way that makes sense, not to mention the fact that you've turned Kagome into a youkai and made it something totally believable.

You're a phenomenal writer (and you made me ramble lol), and I look forward to more of this! Keep up the marvelous job!

~Aubrey

*Claps her hands* This story is positively lovely in the highest degree! Refreshing indeed. I agree with your other reviews, your protroyal of Kagome is wonderful. She is not her 'normal' self but she is still her and Sesshomeru oh man I love him in this story. Still true to his character,Ice Dog of the West, but there is something more to him that you hint at. Maybe I might be reading a bit too much into the things that he does but all well. Just here to say I love this story. I watch for updates everyday. Please keep going. You have me hooked under yout Kitsune spell;)

Hiya!

This is a really interesting story so far! I saw a picture depicting Kagome as a fox demon with Sesshoumaru and Rin and Shippou sleeping between them with a link to this story, and was intrigued enough to read it. I'm glad I did: it's been very cute so far.

I really enjoyed the struggle Kagome feels between losing her human qualities for more youkai traits and how she struggles to hold on to the parts of herself that are gone and that are still there. I thought that was really brilliantly done. I also really appreciated that you had an intermediate stage wherein she didn't know how to control herself as a youkai and acted very much like an intelligent animal. That really conveyed how unsuited and unprepared she was for the situation that became her, though it's worked out well for her so far, haha.

One thing I wanted to mention was your endings. The way you end your chapters seems very weak, almost unresolved, in many cases. It feels like you've cut the scene prematurely, as if you decided to finish in the middle of an important scene. It tends to be unfulfilling for readers and can be frustrating at times. I think ending it a little more neatly--maybe giving the readers more time to wind down or more of an indication that the chapter's coming to an end earlier on would help you out with that a lot.

Thanks for the read!

Oh pls pls plssss update soon! *shippous puppy eyes* I love this story and cant wait to for the next chapters. 

~Voracious

Hmmm I think Sesshomaru needs to examine why he felt the way he felt when Kagome told him she wasnt going to be mating Sesshomaru. But please update soon. 

YAY! An Update! :D

Awe! Such a sweet chapter!

Sesshoumaru unknowingly putting his foot in his mouth and making her cry! LOL!

He's totally falling for her and soooo doesn't know it yet. LOVE IT!

Great chapter!

Update again soon please!

~Starfyre

~~You've been updating so much!! XD I LOVE it! Keep it up! Your portrayal of them is fantastic and each chapter is so well done and so sweet, that I wish the chapters were ten times longer! XD Wishful thinking, I know lol But: More please! :D

This is wonderful. I could read and re-read this over and over again.

Keep them coming!

xoxo

What a wonderful chapter, I was a little sad for Inuyasha's sake. But hopefully he will find a suitable woman/demoness in this fantastic story of yours. So on that note please update soon. 

Great chapter!

I look forward to more more more!

I wonder if Miroku understands the full weight of what Kagome did, if not I'm sure Sango will explain later.

:)

~Starfyre

Ah, so lovely, so touching...

::sigh:: this always happens. I find a story I love and then I have to WAIT to read more. :P  Waiting is the hardest part.

What a sadly tragic chapter. It's so good though. I can feel both of their pain. And their acceptance and understanding.

Very poignant. very good chapter.

Love it.

~Starfyre

This was a good update. I like the transition that you are making with Inu and Kag's relationship. So good. I look forward to the next update.

I think you did a great job of keeping IY in charcater. YOu have taken him beyond the cliched fanon versions of him and created a three dimesniosla character not the cardboard cutout we so often see spoutng the same tired lines.

I'm so relieved you decided to come back to this story. Ill admit I was starting to worry maybe just a little bit. Anyway hopefully this new....thing between Kagome and Sesshomaru means they'll be moving forward with a relationship or something, but all in due time. Don't want the story to end too early =) please update soon.