What is it with your dialogue timing??? They make me feel gooey. Emotional development between the characters also flow so beautifully, not forced at all.
If you could have a proper editing done, the final work would be exquisite.
Dear maria, I eagerly await all future chapters for this story, The mischievous lady and the Bridges of Paradise. May your muse remain ever faithful to you.
Keep it coming.
"Yes, love?" Awww!!! That right there caused me an embarrassing fangirl squeal moment lol The subway....hmm,...Sess would def have a hird time riding that lool
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
Awwww he's so sweet and cute!! Damn, I don't know how Kagome hasn't fallen madly in love with him yet with all the things he says to her! They MUST reconcile sooooooooon!!!
Oh no Sesshomaru and Naraku in the future, it's bad that Naraku when through too, I wonder where did he go! Keep it coming.
Is there gonna be another chapter?
Awww that was sooo incredibly sweet as a gesture!!! How can a woman not fall for a man like that?? I can't blame Kagome...
Thank you for participating in my challenge, Maria! I really hope to see more of your chapters in the future! Keep up the great work ^^
Poor Kagome =(
Oh shit... who the hell is that demoness?! I'll kill herrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Sweet! This is so sweet!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
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