Poor Sess-kun is deluding himself he if thinks that Kagome will, willingly subservient these 'rules' of his. But none-the-less it will be fun to ‘watch’ how this will play out. A great first chapter; I love your writing style. It was very easy for me to picture- in my mind- what was happening.
Lina (Chapter 14) - Mon 14 Dec 2009
Wow, while this isn't my usually the type of story I like I can't deny that you have painted a very beautiful tapestry regardless. Your charaterization is very well done and I just love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru. While his character is very forceful and pigheaded, it's kinda endearing at the same time. Thank you for sharing and I can't wait for more! ^_^
sushiko (Chapter 14) - Thu 14 May 2009
I LOVE YOUR STORY! please please update as soon as you can! i can't wait to see what happens next. sayounara! ^_^
tatiana (Chapter 14) - Sat 04 Oct 2008
So good! I can't wait to read the rest! Please update soon.
- tatiana (woof woof!!)
i love it a lot...tho its usually something i wouldn't read but i decided to give this story a shot and it was worth it! =D
This story is so great. I've been tracking it on ASS, then ff.net, and now it's here! Its so original, and it appeals to a slightly more disturbed part of myself. Well done!
I'm amazed and saddened that this fine story has not garnered more reviews. I attribute most of it to summer madness, though. I am enjoying every twist and turn as you depict Sesshoumaru's high-handed, ofttimes misguided, courting of Kagome. I sincerely hope that you find the time, even with school approaching, to be able to continue. Thanks for such entertaining, engrossing reading! :D ~~Wiccan~~
sashey (Chapter 14) - Thu 21 Aug 2008
i just don't know how to say how amazing your story is to me. it't original and whenever possible i just keep trying to see if you have updated. please continue to write and update whenever possible.
Jazmin (Chapter 13) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
I have to say that your story is very well written and has kept me hooked from the beginning. I was even considering blowing off a date with my bf just to finish this chapter. Anyway, I'm looking forward to a new chapter...and soon I hope. :D please??
(Chapter 3) - Tue 12 Aug 2008
why is he refering to himseelf in third person? He isn't of british royality.
miko (Chapter 13) - Tue 12 Aug 2008
finally, manage to read your another chapter, and i am forever grateful for that... and looking forward for another, but still, you need to concern for your health, now, we don't want you to fall ill, right, not when your fiction is getting interesting... get a good rest, okay... and by the way, of course he would refer himself as the third person... didn't they watch the anime? i'm up for you.. videokilltheradio!
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