WOW!! I just read this story from beginning to now and I am just blown away by how emotionally detailed this story is. I could feel Kagome's anger and pain and Yuriye's fright. Please update when you can and do not give up on this story.
When do we get to find out about the little girl that is the source of Kagome's blood tears? What will happen when Kagome tells Togaou the truth that he seeks? Will Sesshou ever learn the same truth? How will he react to Kagome's story? Please update soon and keep up the amazing work :P
sunset in love (Chapter 16) - Fri 20 Feb 2009
that bad? she was treated that bad huh? why did ssshoumaru never aware of this happening? didn't his father consulted him, you realy should update soon... please...
| Awww cliffhanger thats horribly mean of you!! Write more now!!PLEASE!! I wonder whats going to happen when Kagome and Tagaou talk? Is Sesshomaru going to overhear the conversation or when he asks his father about Kagome will he tell? Or will he find out whats happened to her another way. Gah theres just to many choices I hate guessing! lol. Oh and the blood tears concept very intresting and original!
Please update again soon I love this story!! :) Keep up the awsome work!!
Nobody (Chapter 8) - Wed 18 Feb 2009
I need to take action writing lessons from you. I liked it. It was alittle hard to get into at first but that smoothed out after a few chapters. Great job keep it up.
oh wow this is just a heart wrenching story I am bawling can't wait to read more
This fic just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait when Kagome reconnects with Inuyasha's dad. BTW, I think you spelled Tagaou wrong... isn't it supposed to be Toga or Touga? You might want to check on that. And when will we get the full back story on Kagome? Or her time at the detention center? Or the story behind her blood tears? Keep up the good work and update really soon :P
| aaaaaahhhhhh! You are so evil how dare you leave a cliffly like that after all this time. That's it me and my crew are gonna find you and force you to keep typing ain't that right guys....guys...hey where did they go. Yo seriously this is going great keep up the great work I can't wait for the next update...
higan (Chapter 15) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
| why?? why do u leave it on such a cliffhanger WOMAN??!!!??
gah!!!
other than that.. i liked the whole tears are blood thing it was a very interesting concept to youkai emotions and such.. it was very different.. u made kags have such a different level of emotions compared to others..
so what other demons are on the campus?? -if any- types?? could u describe that?? like different people too, since its a school it would make some sense to see a different picture or people in this case, ya know?
umm.. im not the best at stuff so i'll be blunt..
only thing that got me confused was the last chapter.. the beginning.. u explained the fact that people were leaving the campus like 4 times in 6 different ways.. do u get what i mean?? try describing the lack of students more if thats what u want to portray.. but just watch how u describe i think.. though u dont have to take this i was just confused really.. maybe its me..
other than that.. i missed U!!! please keep writing.. i cant wait for more.. good job!!
sunset in love (Chapter 15) - Wed 11 Feb 2009
| YOU ARE VERY NAUGHTY!!!! it's too cliffy (whining...), i was too wrapped up in the chapter until suddenly it ends at 'historical worth moment' of tagaou (do you meant to have it read as touga?) and kag meeting... please update soon
SakuraMoon89 (Chapter 13) - Wed 17 Dec 2008
AWESOME!!!!!!! So why haven't you written another chapter? I'm sitting on the edge of my seat here. I started reading yesterday, but I had to leave, and it was almost impossible to tear myself away from the computer. Not many stories do that to me!!! So I really didn't want to stop reading. I would be completely ecstatic if you added more!!!
| I'm very happy I came across this story. I love your development of it.
higan (Chapter 11) - Mon 17 Nov 2008
| AWESOME LAST CHAPTER!!!
yes. i am yelling that out loud by the way. just so u know.
i loved the last bit, very descriptive. i cant wait for their history to come out!!!
**points at you** make it so number one!
higan (Chapter 7) - Sun 28 Sep 2008
| so action packed this last chapter was.. i sounded like yoda there.
anways.. this was a very insightful battle towards ur plot. i like how u make it that not all good people are good, i wonder if that is all so the way for evil? herm??
is there going to be any other characters introduced i wonder? well, im hooked! so hurry up with the new chapter.. lol! i'll wait i'll wait.. but very very impatiently!
higan (Chapter 6) - Fri 12 Sep 2008
| i loved your adjective descriptions. and they're insight to their troubled lives.. the smidges we got.. it was awesome. some people like to leave the tease and u did it perfectly. i love this different play on the characters, because there is only soo many ways to describe black. i love that name yuriye.. it soo different. im shocked though that u would make sango seem to timid like. normally she is the 'power bitch' this fic is very eunique. its not the cliche story or the kagome gets magically turned in to a demon from some stupid thing or other.. its very well written. so far i have no problems. keep up the AWESOME!! and the GOOD!
too lazy to log in (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Sep 2008
| Read to chapter 2~
Hmm... I don't usually like OC characters in fan fiction stories, especially is they play a main role. I also particularly did not like how you described Kagome with white hair. Even if she was an Inu, I believe she should retain the majority of her usual appearances as seen in the anime at least. That's about it. You have a good writing style, it's just little details like that that irk me a bit.
| Interesting story can't wait for the next one. When does Sesshoumaru come in? Just waiting to see the pair meet up.... Hmmm I guess I can wait....
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