Okay! You... are a fucking GENIUS!!! I mean seriously... all these chapters are great, but after the obi incident, having the two of them fight over a fucking duck? And them paying more attention the the damn duck than Toga? I swear... this story is so fucking funny, at the rate it's going, I'm going to be admitted to a hospital because I laughed myself into a coma. What do you think the doctors would do? And the newspapers? They would have a massive field day with that one... 'Girl admitted to hospital because she laughed herself into a coma'. I can see that on the front page... keep up these awesome chapters and this great story, and it just may happen...
Oh my God! This chapter was just fucking funny! I was laughing so hard I thought I'd laugh myself right into a coma! Kagoma and Sesshomaru... playing tug-o-war with an obi? Genius! And it's a hoot too! I'm really enjoying this story.
Keep it coming.
u2pias (Chapter 54) - Tue 11 Sep 2012
I really like you portrail of Toga and Fuiasu. Of course the antics of young Sess and Kag are adorable!! Please update soon.
*totally worth the wait..;!*P
Keep it coming.
Kami, I hate her mother! What a bitch! Who treats their own daughter that way?! What happened that shamed the West? Was her mother able to have visions too and she saw something, or is she just pissed she has a daughter instead of a son? Either way, that woman doesn't deserve children OR to have been Lady of the West to begin with!
I love how you give such strong feelins and personalities to your characters in so few words. Looking forward to more. :)
Haven (Chapter 54) - Sat 11 Aug 2012
Awesome updates! I like Atsuki's future role. Sessy mom in general is one of my faves because she's such an under-utilized yet cool character with so many possibilities. I love your Fuiasu -- beautiful, mighty, with powers of prognostication and now we see vulnerable. When I read Fuiasu, she reminds me of Galadriel from LOTR which is a compliment! After reading these last few chaps, it makes me all nervous to find out how and when Toga and her relationship fails, IF it fails at all now that Kagome is back in time. Well done. Can't wait for more.
Fuiasu's mother is a twat! and i really hope something awesomly evil happened to her. other then that I'm so excited about the many updates @_@ so awesome. we got a lot of story in!
Fluffy (Chapter 36) - Tue 07 Aug 2012
gasp so cute!
Awwwwe. Heart warming :)
*omq... Beyond excited. I really love how you went bout the whole thing... It's so cute!!!!
Can't wait to more more more...:) keep it up*
dee (Chapter 9) - Mon 06 Aug 2012
I am just dying with the overflow of cute puppies being cute.
dee (Chapter 7) - Mon 06 Aug 2012
So cute!!! InuPapa is just great!
Meow (Chapter 36) - Mon 06 Aug 2012
damn love this cute story kinda gave me a happy tear jerker with the sleep chapter ><
What if the guard wih the dark aura ends up getting Kagome and Sesshoumaru seperated, Atsuki becomes Kagome's adoptive father while she's off in hiding/exile/ whatever ends up happening, and Kagome doesn't come back (to the West or Japan), until the younger Kagome is gone? Hope this gives you some ideas.
This is so adorable, I love it! I am a bit worried about what will happen in the future though, since the new Kagome won't be able to see herself when she begins to travel in time, and since Sesshoumaru tries to kill Kagome when she's still human, assuming she still looks the same when she reaches adolescence as she did as a human teen, then I feel that Sesshy and Kagome will be seperated before they can see each other in their adolescent states, or something bad will happen and Sesshoumaru will hate Kagome. I'm already getting confused with the impending time paradox.
Anyways, keep up the fantastic work!
All eight chapters are great, keep it coming.
this is so cute! i love how she's all Sho-mu!
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