PLEASE start writing this story again it was so good i cant wait for it to be finished
PLEASE UPDATE this great story with the characthers done very well
i would wish for you to continue thank you
This is a really good story. I've read osme of the things you wrote on Single Spark and I have to say you are a really good writer. I cannot wait to see what happens next. :D
I don't care what you do with Bunza~~~ But you just CAAAAAAN'T Have Totosai dead! He's soo.... totosai-y!
I have immensely enjoyed your story up til now, and wasted precious hours of homework on doing do. Please, give me more :3
MLMonty (Chapter 15) - Fri 12 Sep 2008
Something NOT internet related? I don't approve of that. Hell I intend to take my laptop on my marriage retreat to Garmish. Just to annoy my husband I doubt I'll use it much.
You could always let the parents get together AFTER Sess and Kag are married. If you do an epilogue I guess. I don't see them getting married any time soon since she's still in high school. Though I guess you could have them do that after she graduates.
So what's with her refusing to share the bed? Is it because last time they did they got that phone call so now she associates it with negative things?
REDWOLF (Chapter 15) - Fri 12 Sep 2008
This was a GREAT chapter! You are one of my favorite Authors and you and this fic are on my "favorite lists"! Keep up the fine work!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 15) - Fri 12 Sep 2008
Who sent Kagura to deliver the package? Is Kagome's father really dead? And was naraku the one who had Bunta point the gun at Totosai? I look forward to the court hearing. Please keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie. :P
OH MY GOSH! FINALLY! :]]]] U PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER! IT'S BEEN MONTHS! I LUVED This Chapter! That Naraku! Grrrr....I Hate Him Even More In Your Story Than I Do While Watching the Real InuYasha Series! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can! (And Actually Do It This Time My Friend!) :] Luv U!
WOW! That was amazingly intense! I have to know what happens next! It was a very good chapter though. There's nothing wrong with some good, old-fashioned drama!
Man, Kikyo is a biiiiiiiitch in this! lol! Good job!
Daren (Chapter 14) - Mon 08 Sep 2008
DON'T STOP!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE IT'S REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 14) - Mon 08 Sep 2008
This is really an exciting fic! Hell, you never know from one minute to the next whats gonna happen. I love it!
Wow! I really REALLY dislike Kikyo! I can't wait to see how the story progresses.
Poor Rin-chan. She's just so innocent. All she wanted was her mommy and daddy...and what did she get? Mowed down by her own uncle. That's a shame. I hope somebody beats the ever loving stuffing out of Kikyo!!
glad that inuyasha's starting to hurt ((which sounds really mean of me XP)) turn it up a bit next time!!! lol
poor rin and souta they are both sooo innocent and inuyasha i know he was trying to keep his promise but, its his bestfriends little brother for gods sake.....but i hope you continue soon
wawa (Chapter 13) - Wed 03 Sep 2008
Poor Rin. Seeing so much at a young age. At least she has Sesshoumaru and Kagome.
I'm really enjoying the story so far and I am looking forward to when you can update again. I'm very sorry to hear your sad news.
Murphey's Law indeed! What a crappy thing to wake up to after your first time. So much drama :) I think the lemon was well done! Great job ^_^
Lovely....Kagome was the delighful epitome of an excited young girl when she's gifted with rare luxuries. And Sesshoumaru was so soft and sweet as the indulgent lover, it made me feel all warm! I love your story.
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