Poor kagie and meani sesshy..
For a starter your writing quite good and acceptable to me.
Dont worry..keep writing and dont give up.
Im sure you have fans..and sure i'm one of them.
Ganbatte!
I am sorry to hear about your troubles. At least you have a precious son to care for. Children can be a source of joy at the weirdest times I swear. You will get over and through your darkest times. I did it, I raised two sons by myself and I am proud of them. I missed your writing and I am glad that you are back with a vengence. Looking forward to your future chapters.
"As Sesshomaru watched the car disappear into the horizon, his heart sank, feeling as though he’d made a grave mistake. However, his pride would never allow him to let go of the hurt he felt that morning when he watched the miko run out of his life without so much as a goodbye."
Really Sesshoumaru, what where you expecting a hug and kiss goodbye. You called her a slut; I'm surprised she didn't hit you. Is the reason that he's acting this way just because she left without saying anything the morning after? Too bad that they don't force parents to pay child support in Japan.
