In the words of Inuyasha, "Fan- fucking Tastic",Wonderful, sweet, loving, and most of all,Fan-fucking tastic, more, more....

Best line in this chapter: 

"It ripped at her mind and pulled at the fabric of her perceived reality." 

This creates perfect imagery, and shows just how grand the pain is.

You have a wonderful idea and your writing style is great.

You do some misphaps and awkward phrasing at times, but hey, we're all human.  

i love this story  do you have anything else out so i can reas it

Wow, I really enjoyed this story. What a wonderful little surprise. Destiny is just kick ass and I think you captured papa Sess very well.  Foul mouth Kags is hilarious, too. I love you all the more for a finished story -- you don't know how much that is appreciated. I hope you write another story as I'll be on the look out! Thanks again!

This was a great story but in 300 yrs why didn't Sessh & Kagome have any pups together?

damn good story!

I really loved your story. Kagome's character is quite refreshing as the no bull s**t kinda girl.I would have like to know why Rin was banished though and what happened to inuyasha after he turned human. But overall great story

i liked your story

Spek, this was AWESOME! I really enjoyed the banter between Kagome and Sesshomaru, as well as the witty commentary in between. Please don't hesitate to post your work EVER again, or I will come find you and chain you to your computer until you do! Can't wait to read what else you come up with! Much loves...

This was a rather interesting fic, from beginning to end. I'm still wondering where Inuyasha ended up after being purified into a human. I guess that would be left to the imagination. He most likely ended up in another country, maybe mainland China to start a new life away from the only place he's ever called home or maybe a distant island somewhere in the Pacific. Anywho, this was fun to read.