Geez, Rin is such a spoiled brat in this fic. I want to put her over my knee and spank her. And I don't have kids. What ever happened to her mother anyway? Guess I have to read the earlier chapters to find out. She seriously needs her comeuppance. More!
a SPOILED brat. I actually adore Rin, but in your story she is nothing but a spoiled brat, that only want her happiness.
Hmm...wonder who will figure it all out first and when Rin will get over herself (she is now in high school). I wonder what Sesshoumaru will do now that he knows Kagome has a boyfriend. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Well written, more, more...
I sooo do not like Rin!!! She seriously needs a spanking! Thanks for the update :)
Ha! So the story starts to unfold, and to a kitsue at that. I'm loving this
Oh what a horrid little brat. I can't wait for someone to show her how unfair she's been to her poor father all this time. :(
So! I have been moved to review by ur fantastic story :) . The way u write leaves me anxious for the next chapter, it's wonderful.(I literally do a happy dance when I see 'child's blunder' has been updated!...people do stare because sometimes I'm in public lol). You have flawlessly made me hate Rin so much that I wish something horrible will happen to her very soon!(like next chapter) I leave the writing in ur capable hands though:). Fantastic story I love it<3 (ps:I adore the way u present Kagura I felt like awwing out loud at some of the scenes xD )
Well its not everyday a person can make me dislike Rin when she is still Sesshomaru's daughter. She is a little snot in this story and i love it because it so acurrately portrays what a lot of girls go through with their father's if they arent with their mother after a divorce or death. The other times i might find a dislike for Rin is when she is OCC, older and fighting against Kagome for Sesshomaru. Hope you update soon i really enjoy this fic :)
i REALLY hate rin. can something bad please start happening to her, she's ruining her dad's life. part of me hopes that her dad doesnt want anything to do with her when he finds out that she hates all females. controling lilk heffer >:l
Very cool. Can't wait to see Rin get her just desserts in a very loud and fabulous way.
Please update soon.
When I first read the scene where Sess broke up with Kagome I noticed the part where she appeared to have something in her pocket. I was just sure it was a positive pregnancy test! I'm assuming that's not what it was if you decided to not write her as having been pregnant... unless she lost it in the car accident or something. Anyway, great story! I'm looking forward to more!
I appreciate and love the update, but a part of me wonders when Kagome will meet up with Sesshomaru again. Hopefully in the next chapter? Hahaha...I'm impatient, is all. Thank you. ( :
Help them get together, for he is hurting and she is too, they need each other for support and a life that is complete, he will accept her scarred appearance when no one else would, Right?
PLease tell me I am right, she is as much a hermit as him, they deserve each other....
Awesome chapter! I liked the scene between Sesshoumaru and Kagura its not often that they have a decent relationship and it was a nice change :) On a side note I understand you rushed to post the chapter up which I am grateful for but just watch out for the spelling as there were a couple of places that really stood (or where you used a different word instead of what you had intended) out other than that it was great. :)
I'm kind of sad that Kagome will have to face Sesshomaru, as Kagura's party. I can already imagine the anguish she is going to be feeling soon. Thank you for the update.
Why do I get the feeling something bad will happen when Rin sees Kagome at this party, especially with her injury.
Take your time with the updates, no pressure, just go at your own pace. If you force yourself to write, then writing will no longer be fun for you!
That being said...Can't wait for more!!! Lol.
i'm so excited~ i hope you update again lol when your muse comes up :D its interesting~
Oh darn, and here I was certain she was pregnant! Poor Kags, having to go through that. I wonder though what she was going to tell him that day Sesshy dumped her? And it sounds like they'll finally at least see one another again at Kagura's party! And sickness...blech...it sucks. I prefer to hide under the covers for as long as possible and ignore the world for as long as I can ;)
This story is very good. It's one of the stories here that I always check if it has been updated. I also find the small world situation very interesting. I can't wait until Sesshomaru sees Kagome again.
Hope you update soon!! :)
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