This story reads as if it's two stories that were melded into one. At first Kagome is our typical Kagome, then in the second half she's insane. In the first half Kagome makes a deal with Sesshomaru, and she ends up giving him a future favor. This favor is never mentioned again. Also, where did Rin and Shippo go? This story is full of holes. It appears the author gave up on it and tagged a "The End" on the last chapter. 

Was fun to read a story where Kagome becomes obsessed and posessive first. Quite enjoyed your story. Thank you!

I was trying to wait until the end of the story to comment but this is batty as hell and not in a good way 

Ah, so happy they are. 0///0

I guess Im happy for them ^^

O_O

Hmm... Tea...tea lady...

Tea...lady...the tea...

This was a nice meet up chapter. Everything is flowing nicely

Hmm...I wonder what will happen...

Scaryyyyyyy

0_0

Ah, so nice :)

And they doom themselves...and dont notice... :/

This will be interesting...

I feel she forgot about 'his satisfaction ' part...

Hmn...I wonder...

First I just have to say you're an amazing author! It was very interesting to see Kagome portrayed so differently. I liked it she wasn’t meek or docile! I was reading this last chapter on my phone and lmao your lemon was too much for it!! Made my Iphone crash! Very amazing story thank you!

alright i am intrigued. bring it on!

You have a knack for creating an interesting story, but the numerous grammatical errors and jumpy sentence structure make it a little hard to understand at times. A beta would likely solve this issue.

This is a very different fic. Very different from the normal kagome/sesshomaru type of story and I love your creativity. I think that you ran through this story very quickly and when I finished reading chapter 12 it didn't feel at all like an ending. I wasn't sure what would feel like an ending however because I'm not sure what the story was working towards exactly. Overall your unique story is to be commended, and I think with just a little expansion it could be even better than it already is.

This is a very different fic. Very different from the normal kagome/sesshomaru type of story and I love your creativity. I think that you ran through this story very quickly and when I finished reading chapter 12 it didn't feel at all like an ending. I wasn't sure what would feel like an ending however because I'm not sure what the story was working towards exactly. Overall your unique story is to be commended, and I think with just a little expansion it could be even better than it already is.