I am confused about the reasons Kagome has to have her powers sealed.
Second time around, this is still one of my fave fics, it's really got it all, great character development, interesting storyline, no fanservice even though I'm not against it you still wrote a juicy story without going there, I love this fic, and wish you had more.
I hope you come back. It's been a while and I saw this story through Rinseternalsoul's recommendation. This will go down as one of my true favorites. Fresh and unpredicting with instinctive, animalistic qualities. You did amazing. Thank you for this.
I loved how this story line was completly outside of any other Sess/Kag fic. It was great!!!
ania1224 (Chapter 13) - Sat 02 Oct 2010
This story was a total mind f***, but i loved it none the less :D
chii (Chapter 13) - Sat 25 Apr 2009
kinda short i think. and the end is a bit rushed out, i was confused. love the story mind you, it just that it would have been much better if it was less jumbled
Hairann (Chapter 13) - Thu 25 Sep 2008
| Very nicely done all around. Would have like to see a bit more at the end, but none the less it was a beautiful story, very well written from start to finish.
hasu86 (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| I read this in one sitting (which I don't often do) and damn, I've gotta say that I was completely captured by it, hook, line and sinker. I really loved how you built on the inu behavior, made it such a prominent focus in the story. It really added another feel to it, something entirely new and fresh, very well done. A definitely unique plot so I'm sad to see it come to an end. And poor Keigo, I really liked his character and would have wished to see him live. Overall though, this fic of yours was thoroughly enjoyed! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece!
-hasu
| okay, killing the pup was wrong but it was a good story nonetheless. you ought to do something...a oneshot sequel or something to give them another kid! D: poor unborn kid...i hate it when the unborns die... *sniff* very good story.
tifany (Chapter 13) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| im a little bit confuse what happened to keigo........
Lena (Chapter 13) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| And so it ends. OMG you are a genius. This has got to be one of my favorite stories. I do hope you write another because I am just in love with this one. Kudos for the great story. I am speechless about this story. I love the ending as well it was bitter sweet if I do say so myself. Anyway hope your breing up another story. I an anxiously anticipating seeing another one.
Zyren (Chapter 11) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| ok im not done only on Ch11, but i couldnt go any further without saying jsut how much i love this fic. it absolutely amazing! so original and well written, i jsut get sucked into it and i dont want to stop reading. im in college and ive been catching myself reading it on my laptop during class, totally against the rules but i jsut cant help it. i cant wait to finish it!
| Awwww... this was sooo cute.-grin-
I was worried for a moment that Keigo would have challenged Sess, but... he was too loyal. Where is he now? is he into Kagome? or elsewhere? It was time Mister Love-is-a-filthy-human-weakness realised the treasure he had just in front of him. Keep on the good work!! Dewa mata
| you'd think a miscarriage (sp?) would traumatize her a little more... i mean, her child is dead, gone, not even a minute on earth and it dies
FluffyLady (Chapter 12) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
| too cute. veyr good story. i like how you keep up with and build on the inu body language and don't just drop it once its purpose for that moment is done. very well done.
Lena (Chapter 12) - Wed 17 Sep 2008
| I love this story. I read this for like two days straight. Please update soon.
N/A (Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Sep 2008
| Love your story, its great and has me reading late into the night. If i say so myself, this is one of the best Sess/Kago i've this year. Please update as soon as possible.
| Yay!!!! WootWootWoot!!! Yippeeee!!! -ahem- Anyway, I love it, I want more. What to say? Yes, I especially like your explanations about inu behaviours. Sesshomaru is very In character, and that is very very enjoyable. Is it me or is it getting hot down here? -heh- please update soon ^_^ Dewa mata
(Chapter 12) - Mon 15 Sep 2008
| This update was impossibly long in coming, but I'm so happy it finally came. This story is in my top five favorites and the latest installment has not disappointed. The way you describe behavior in your characterizations is what makes this story stand out to all the other stories out there. You have such talent and vision. I only hope this update lends itself to more in the very near future! *glomp* thank you so much for sharing it with us!
| ohhhhh crud is 2:30 in the morning. This is all your fault for writing such a riveting story. haha i guess you'll just have to update soon to make it up to me :)
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