This was very nicely done it sounded both lyrical and poetic.   I felt very sad for Sesshoumaru, you made his loss palpable. I'm curious, though, as to how she died.  

This was very sad, but beautiful.  Except for a few typos I noticed, it was well written, and I liked how descriptive you were in portraying Sesshoumaru's sadness.

Omg - that was so sad.  I actually teared up a little reading it (i'm kind of a sucker for these things).  I love angst, but I'm still sad that Kagome and sesshoumaru are separated in this fic.  The only problem i had was sentence structure.  You had varied sentences, but i still felt that i was reading a list of what happened rather than a moment.  It didnt take away from the overall enjoyment though.  Good work!

ducky out!

That was absolutely beautiful.  I had to cry. I wish there was a bti more back story though.

You did a pretty good job on this. very discripted, very easy to follow and the story flowed rather nicely.A bit too much emotion from Sesshoumaru in my opinion, though other than that it wasn't too bad.  But would recommend watching your tenses as they got a bit jumbled at times.

This is very nice, but sad as well. I am all angsty lately, so it suits me perfectly. I wonder, what killed her? Sometimes, not knowing is better. I will continue to read if it is extended, but it is lovely as it is. There are a few grammar problems, such as using he's instead of his, but these can all be fixed by using a good beta. Good luck!

The loss of his mate was very palpatable. Being the stoic youkai that he is, expressing that much grief is quite a feat. How long were they mated ? Were the kids, Rin & Shippou or their own together? How did she die?

Anno, I think she 'ascended' to heaven and not the other way around...:)

that was lovly, very sad, but lovly...there were deep emotions that you expressed very well i must say....got me a little misty eyed there at the end even....an excellent job i must say...bravo!!!