This is a very good beginning. I hope you have more to add.
My this was a goo way to start the story. I do hope you'll add more soon!
Koki (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Mar 2009
My this was a goo way to start the story. I do hope you'll add more soon!
| I love the gallows humor. This is a great start and I am very interested in reading more.
| It's a good beginning. I like your writing and the chapter leaves me wanting to know more. Please keep up the good job (with longuer chapters pleaaaaase XD)
Dewa mata
tina (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Jul 2008
| wow what a beginning ! I would love to see how your story goes keep up the good work
Shay (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Jul 2008
| now this is a scarey beginning lol but i hope it gets a whole lot better l8tr on!!
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