Reviews for Atrapados by JeniNeji

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sammi (Chapter 12) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

(too lazy to log in hehe) but *faints* oh goodness!!!! panties :D and awws i hope they don't die in there :(


koneji (Chapter 12) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

So dark - I love your takes in this! From the alternate fate, to their methods of survival, it's all a very compelling read. Keep up the fantastic writing!


Neo-Crystal (Chapter 12) - Wed 11 Jan 2012

I smell a lemon coming up (hopefully??? Puppy eyes)

Poor fluffy and kagome being in that situation.


Venita (Chapter 12) - Wed 11 Jan 2012

OOH hot scene about to start, I can;t wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.


Venita (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Jan 2012

Both chapters are great, please update soon.


Saraniya (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Jan 2012

Amazing story! I can't wait to read more!


Sassy C (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Jan 2012

I'm so confused what the whole "drinking a youkai's blood" does! Its never explained, making it a little too far-fetched for the Inuyasha universe for me. I'll keep reading, because the story is a good plot. But you gotta explain that blood drinking more. What significance does it have in youkai society? Its so random, and Kagome obviously knows what it means because its obviously significant in some way... But if its not explained to the reader somehow, it's just random and weird. Its more like Vampire Diaries or maybe True Blood, in which their blood is addictive.


InuAngel (Chapter 10) - Mon 09 Jan 2012

Your fic is awesome!!! I can't say one bad thing about it.  I love your version of the characters, especially Mideroku I don't think I spelled her name right, anywho, in most evey fic I have read she is all goodness and sweet.  She is not bad just predjust, spelled that wrong to, but you know what I am saying, Also, who wouldn't be after fighting demons day and night her soul is miserable with all that fighting and being trapped inside a dismal place.  Awesome portrayal I mean your version of her is realistic.  I love the way Sessy made Kaogome eat lucky girl.  I just wish it wasn"t written in drabbles, I ususlly don't read them but I had to read this one.  The only reason I don't like drabbles is because the chapters are way to short and I get so into them and it's done!!!  I am sticking to yours it's incrediable and I thought I'd let you know.  I am constantly checking for updates, I am reading some of your other work as well I believe and I can't say one bad thing about any of what you do. You are an excellent writer and I can tell you enjoy what you do and you do it well.  I am looking forward to more from you with this story and some new ones,  Will we know what is happened on the other side of the jewel?  I really don't care that can wait till last, if the chapters were longer yeah but I perfer to keep reading about the inside.  No I am not complaining about short chapters, I believe in writers, writing in their in own way the way they want, it's their story, they know what they are doing.  You definatley know what you are doing. I hope Kagome gets over what she saw Sessy do, eating the other demon, she accepts he is a demon and he has to hunt and eat lesser beings just like humans do except we cook ours, We eat with smiles on our faces to and enjoy it so why can't he?  I can't wait to see how the characters grow and how they get out.  Thanks for an excellent fic!  Until next time write on!

 

Much Love

InuAngel


MissKatt (Chapter 10) - Mon 09 Jan 2012

Umm, okay, Jeni love, it is offical...

I love all of your fanfictions.

Period.

-MissKatt

 


criticat (Chapter 9) - Mon 09 Jan 2012

I wonder if a union of light and darkness is needed for the jewel to dissapear. Can only guess and wait patiently to find out!


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 9) - Mon 09 Jan 2012

oooh.... if i was midoriko i would feel so awkward >_< *blush*


Venita (Chapter 9) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

That was hot, Kagome and Sesshomaru going at it in the front of Midoriko, please update soon.


Venita (Chapter 8) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

Keeping more coming, pleaae update soon.


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 7) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

Ooooh, the SUSPENSE is killing me!  I love this story, it's so unique, and I can hardly wait to see what's going to happen to them next!  WILL Midoriko work with them?  CAN she put aside her hatred and distrust??  *sigh*  I guess I'll just resolve to wait patiently for you, dear authoress, to let us in on the answers.  Thanks so much for sharing all your hard work with all of us!

:D

~~Wiccan~~


criticat (Chapter 7) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Thank you for this lovely long chapter! I am set on stalking this story now :) Not that I am not stalking your other stories too.. but they are just so good!

Poor Midoriko, she has no choice but to agree.


criticat (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Trust Sesshomaru to twist things round so he is the one that is graciously offering help to others :)


criticat (Chapter 5) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Ah so that's what the claim thingies are! Midoriko is great.

I have a funny feeling that she will not be of any help to them in this case.

 


criticat (Chapter 4) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

It's so unpredictable! I have no idea where you will take it and that's what makes it awesome :)


criticat (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Jan 2012

Wasn't the Shikon initially made of souls of a demon and a priestess? History repeating itself! It's so cool!


Sammi-Chan (Chapter 7) - Fri 06 Jan 2012

wow i really got into this!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter! midoriko kinda reminds me of inuyasha lol!


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