Aww...this is very sad! I think it conveys emotion very well. You should keep up! I am dying of curiosity on exactly how he died...

Very interesting.  I'm so curious to know what had happened that made Sesshoumaru sacrifice his life for Kagome's, as well as what happens after she sees his ghost.  I hope you continue this story.

Okay, so this fic is going to be a bit supernatural in essence, right?  I'm kind of unsure about Kagome's method of coping with sesshoumaru's death.  (Now, this is just me, but i wouldnt be watching a musical if the person i loved had just died) I guess everyone has their own way of coping but to me, i felt that the musical was just a way to add in the lyrics, which were fine; but i could have done without that part.  The ending of chapter one was pretty cool because of the ghostly figure present.  I kind of get reminders of one of my most favorite cheesy movies of all time: Ghost!  <3 The plot is wonderful, and i like the editing.  I do want to read more, so i hope you update!

ducky out

I enjoyed this very much, and I do hope you choose to continue it.

Story seems a bit rushed truthfully and need to make sure you only have one person talking or thinking in a single paragraph.  With a bit of work, you could have a pretty decent start to a story here.  Word of warning though, with 'Note: Those that wish for me to continue, please leave a message in the reviews, ok?' be very careful as that is borderlineing on breaking the rules here at Dokuga.  Though you aren't tecnically demanding reviews, it does come off as sounding like you aren't going to update unless someone reviews and tells you to.

Oh you must continue and please explain how they got together and how he died trying to save her. Your portrayal of Kagome is spot on with the way she would think even if this AU. InuYasha seems to be very accepting of his brother's demise and of the relationship that Kagome had with him.

evil evil cliffie :P, with a well writen chapter like this how could a person not want you to continue...i sincerely hope you decide to continure this and will eagerly await the next chapter!!!