Your lack of it just fried my brain.
Great chapter, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR! 
      
Sessygurl (Chapter 2) - Tue 03 Jan 2012 
You have a great story here but you need a beta bad. The grammar problems take a way from the story. Oher than that I cant wait to see what happens next. 
      
Venita (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Dec 2011 
This story is interesting, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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