Aww...that was so sad. I just hope she is able to come back to him. It is true, in lots of different mythologies, that the gods were schemers and tricksters and liked to use mortals for their own amusement. I guess this is a new take on what it would be like if someone were to actually know they were being used for that very reason. I liked this, hope to read more from you!

This was so sad and sweet.  It was well written, too.  I know this was a one-shot, but it was written in a way that you could turn it into a chapter story, if you ever decided to do so. 

The overall premise of the fic is very interesting.  Sesshoumaru and Kagome are such polar opposites in the manga/anime that i like the portrayal of kagome as an angel and sessh as a demon... It kind of reminds me of angel sanctuary (a kickass manga).  However, I do have to point out that the transition from first person kagome to third person to first person sessh was confusing.  It would have been better if it were all third person and you broke it up into different chapters with different perspectives... mebbe? idk good work and more updates please!

ducky out!

It seemed a little rushed.  Perhaps a little back story might help with the flow a little.

A few grammar issues and not really enough story line to really give you readers the whole picture, seeing as this is marked as a one-shot.  Also I would confirm in the story that it is Kagome and Sesshoumaru as there is really nothing to do so.  It's not a bad start, but it seems more like an outline rather than a finished one-shot.  Also the lines in italics really seem to distract the reader from the story rather than adding to it, in this case I would say less is more and would recommend limiting the number of those lines that you use, and even taking out the doubles.

wow...would it be too much to hope for a sequile???...that was very good, full of emotion and very well written!!! i will be standing by and hope that you decide to grace us with a continuation of this story!!

It did tears to my eye but does it refer to Kagome & Sesshoumaru? You describe the guardian as a half-inuyoukai, half-angel miko but do not explain who they are. The silver hair and golden eyes can describe just about anyone in Inu-no-taisho's clan but who is the woman.

Visually it was very etheral and flowed quite nicely - all the pain and sorrow and heartbreak comes readily to the surface.

Nicely done.