Hi, I'm just giving you some friendly advice, take no offense please. I'd like to let you know that you spelled "Among" incorrectly. Also, Inu's mom's name is Izayoi. I don't know if this was meant to be spelled like this or if you were just typing quickly but you wrote "thanks" like "thanx." Also, when you're doing little "skits" with yourself and other characters at the beginning or end of chapters you should space it out, also space out your paragraphs as well because when your chapter is so squished together like that it gets hard to keep track of where you are in the chapter. Don't you think? Anywhobie, goodluck and happy writing ^_^