You know what I love more than heartbreaking, sad tearjerker fics? FICS WITH FOOD IN THEM. Oh yeah. Ahaha. SO YOU HAD ME HOOKED ON LIKE PARAGRAPH TWO THERE! No but seriously this was great. A change from your other entry, but not in a bad way at all, and apparently you can work your way amazingly through different genre! 

It was really great, and ... well if you ever happen to add to it, I WOULDN'T COMPLAIN! Ahah. 

aww that was cute. i would love to see you add on to this maybe show another chapter with them working in a kitchen together or something. i think it would be a great story. Well done hun.

Aww, that was awesome! and you made me hungry! -wanders off to the kitchen-

thats cute! now i'm hungry!

awesomesauceness!!! I love food and fics about food ^^ Good job!!!

Well, I am hungry now... :D And I really liked this! Well done!