I love how perceptive Rin is in this. Inuyasha was a complete asshole. Kagome put herself in that bad situation, but I’m glad she got over it relatively quickly. I love how quickly and readily Sesshoumaru expressed his feelings. Both his and Kagome’s pride tend to make things more difficult for them, but they saw the importance of this.
Saeko (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2012
I loved it!!! Now if only I could read all of the existing chapters of SWTPF instead of just 16 of them. I've been dying to reread them!!
Suka25 (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Mar 2012
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story dear! I know it's from a long time ago, but im working the list from old to new now loll... and btw, i adore how you came up with the immortal necklace at the end, great concept! ^^ I'll be looking forward to more of your stories (this one didnt bore me) :P
| First thing first:... AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! TOO CUTE!!!!!! :-) Your story makes me feel all goo-y happy.
Secondly: I believe I have told you this before, but it is people, sorry writers, like you that makes me want to excel in my writting. A well rounded story that captures poeples attention; that's what you achieve when you write a story, as I, could only hope to do such thing. That is why I applaud you for your skills.
Thirdly: Amazing story, loved the way you took a the very clean (and slightly borring) finish of the manga and twisted it around. I remember how Souta answered to his friend that Kagome had gone away to get married... but he never did say to who... For all we know she could be getting married with the toad (shiver in disdain).
| As I have stated on your LiveJournal page this story was absolutely brilliant! I have now re-read it several times and each time I love it just a little more! You have a great way with words and all your stories flow so nicely. You are "in touch" with your feelings and they come through so very clearly. You bring the reader right into the story and keep them there! Great job once again! This is one of my favorites! I only wish the manga would have ended so beautifully, but Thank God, we have you to write us a better ending!!
DebL (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| Loved this one-shot! What a great way to deal both with the ending of the manga and that disgusted look of Sess' when he hears the "Brother" comment! I love your writing style, and you seem to have the great ability to keep the characters in character, even when dealing with situations that are not cannon. I can't wait for your next one-shot or new chapter in SWTPF! btw, when will SWTPF be updated? I've printed it out, and am slowly reading through it (can't spend all that much time looking at a computer screen), but am wondering when the next chappie will be out. If you could email me the answers, I'd appreciate it: Deborah_Lemieux5@msn.com
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| nice! i love it
| I love it. Not the least bit ashamed to say it. I'm waiting for the Syndrome update. That's my all time favorite!! Keep up the excellent and extremely satisfying work!!
L-desu (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| awwwes, what another great story! i simply loved it.
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