Is it sad that the second chapter is my favorite as it made me laugh? Yes? Oh well. =)
Oh yeah, that was hot. You hear so many people want another sex scene.... I somewhat agrea. The desk in his office could be a lot more intertaining than he thought..hehe.
I really liked this story but had a few problems with the lemon part...now don't get me wrong...I LOVE lemons, but I had a hard time when you went back and forth from the descriptions of the sex act from "dirty" and "nasty" to "medically" (penis, phallus, etc.) explained. Or when you did it in the same sentence it really threw me off. I just think it would have been easier to read (and added more passion to your story) if you would have used the same type of description throughout. The storyline was fantastic and I loved the tough side of Kagome (can't go wrong with a story like that!! I love it when she kicks ass!!) and the whole "meeting" thing was a nice touch. Good job and I hope to read more from you!
Wow, talk about one hot story! I loved it, I hope you decide to continue it.
Renee (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
I loved it, it was very hentai. I think you should continue with this like when she is working as his secretary.
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